Hey all I'd like some opinions!
Hey everyone I'm back! ♥
First off I want to thank everyone that helped me in my previous picture, you can see the finished version here! => Click!
Secondly, I need people's advice and general opinions
I'm cureently doing my final major in college (a one year course)and I was given the topic to do something along the lines of 'modern inspiration sequential illustation" Big title I know, but basically, it's to do comics and advertising using digital media in a bright and eye catching style.
After my trip to Paris early in March (which was lovely) I decided to do a small comic based on the cafe's in Paris. One in the centre of Paris and on of the outskirts, where I found that atmosphere, people and architecture are completely contrasted.
Two stories about two cafe's, it's simple enough, I already have the comics drawn (and I will scan and show people when I get time to scan them all) but I have some concept art that I'd like you to look at and tell me what you think. If you think something doesn't look right, tell me. Or if you like something, what is it? Or what do you think is better?
I'm having to evaulate my work and by getting replies from practising artists; novice, pro or just hobbying this will help me in getting a wider response to collect my data from.
So anyway, here are the character concepts. I had to reduce the images to fit:
And the concepts for the exterior of the cafes:
(You have to click reply to see them fully)
Any feedback would be great! ♥
First off I want to thank everyone that helped me in my previous picture, you can see the finished version here! => Click!
Secondly, I need people's advice and general opinions
I'm cureently doing my final major in college (a one year course)and I was given the topic to do something along the lines of 'modern inspiration sequential illustation" Big title I know, but basically, it's to do comics and advertising using digital media in a bright and eye catching style.
After my trip to Paris early in March (which was lovely) I decided to do a small comic based on the cafe's in Paris. One in the centre of Paris and on of the outskirts, where I found that atmosphere, people and architecture are completely contrasted.
Two stories about two cafe's, it's simple enough, I already have the comics drawn (and I will scan and show people when I get time to scan them all) but I have some concept art that I'd like you to look at and tell me what you think. If you think something doesn't look right, tell me. Or if you like something, what is it? Or what do you think is better?
I'm having to evaulate my work and by getting replies from practising artists; novice, pro or just hobbying this will help me in getting a wider response to collect my data from.
So anyway, here are the character concepts. I had to reduce the images to fit:
And the concepts for the exterior of the cafes:
(You have to click reply to see them fully)
Any feedback would be great! ♥