(for xiujaemin) Megalopolitan

[kais]

For: xiujaemin

Title: Megalopolitan
Genre: streetart!au
Rating: PG-13
Length: 5,202 words
Summary: The skyline is beautiful at night, with its shimmering lights and dancing noise. The busy city never seems to sleep because neither does he.
Notes: Thank you for your lovely prompts, prompter. I strayed a bit from the idea on this one, but I hope you still

Comments

[pororoporn]

SPOT FOR xiujaemin !

[xiujaemin]

my exam just finished a while ago and AHHHHHHHHH!!! //more sounds of incoherent screaming//

[nocturnalrescue]

Omgomgomgomg i can comment yes yes yes

[nocturnalrescue]

I feel like there are a bunch of things i should have gone more in depth with. Like ksoo and his british accent was so out of the blue there wasnt enough around that plot point it was mostly just me indulging myself in feels/trying to write a good reason for him to leave/idek i just did it. Also with his de quervains... ugh i mean i wanted to make him have some issue (dont ask me why i really dont know/remember) and i was doing a bunch of quick research for what it could be. It had to be something that inhibited his art in some way or gave him some grief. So i looked into optical issues and slight disabilities first and then settled on that because i suddenly thought hey what about some sort of bad operational issue (oh wait that phrasing sounds ew sorry) and i found d.q. Anyway, i felt that part was just out of sequence and random and ew. And i felt i didnt develop their relationship/explain what was going on between them enough. This story could have benefitted from another couple thousand words and some legitimate time put into it

[kagoume]

'He is fascinating and Jongin's admiration is unhealthy and strange' 'He is fascinating and Jongin's admiration is unhealthy and strange' gosh this is my fave line i've been always interested in photography myself so if i was jongin i would probably do the same too, his photographs must be breathtaking or is it because its kyungsoo that makes it beautiful hihi
thank you so much for the gift on kaisoo day!

[nocturnalrescue]

Well of course! Thank you for your lovely comment <3

I think i wrote it with the thought that it was just kyungsoo himself that made it fascinating but its so cool that it could be seen a different way.

Photography is so amazing though. Capturing something at just the right moment with the right light and ckmposition and subject- its amazing. I dont try photography very much (i love painting so that takes up most of my time) but i still love it.

Tyvm!!!! <3

[pogpungu]

Goodness, this was gorgeous. Well used vocabulary and amazing descriptions. Keep up the lovely work <3

[nocturnalrescue]

Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!

Your comment made me so happy because i tried really hard to have a variety of words and to convey what i wanted with my words and im so glad you liked it and my descriptions got across

Hearts <3

[bookishvice]

A+++++

[nocturnalrescue]

Thank you!! Ive never gotten so high a grade in my life :) (no seriously im so lazy in school its horrible).

I hope you enjoyed reading?

Ye <3

[bookishvice]

I loved reading! I'm so sorry I didn't leave a longer comment. I tend to read at night (more like midnight) and sometimes my brain is too tired to form words ;;; BUT PLEASE KNOW THAT I REALLY ENJOYED STREET ART SOO AND FILM MAKER JONGIN ❤

[nocturnalrescue]

XD im so glad you did!

Yeah i read at like 2am. Thats my time

Im so bad at getting sleep and stuff ugh

[idk321]

Ughhhh it's rly late I should be sleeping because I have to (ironically) get up early for my philosophy class in which were currently learning about expressionism is street art lol. This was so worth staying up to read though omg I have no words to describe it. (Am I completely off by relating Kyungsoo to Banksy??? Probably)

[nocturnalrescue]

I do this a the time with other peoples fics (staying up super super late just to read even though i have other responsibilities) and im like really overwhelmingly happy/amazed that someone did the same thing because of my fic! 0o0

Thats definitely ironic that youre learning about street art in class heheheh :^) but its so true. Street art is much more than simply graffiti!

And youre not completely off. Actually, youre spot on! Xiujaemin gave me a prompt and a link to "Exit Through the Gift Shop" on youtube as a basis, so youre completely right. I even tried to give ksoo the british association, but i did it at the last minute so ugh... yeah anyway

Thank you so much for reading and i seriously mean it when i say your comment made me really happy thank you for the support <3