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Feedback for the 2006 I Saw Three Ships Secret Santa

Jan 06, 2007 09:24

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Feedback for The Way She Moves zvi_likes_tv January 6 2007, 14:25:57 UTC

The Way She Moves a CSI Greg Sanders/Catherine Willows/Sara Sidle story

Re: Feedback for The Way She Moves inalasahl January 7 2007, 06:49:29 UTC

I like the tone you achieved with this piece, especially this part: But he doesn't move back, and neither does Catherine. Sara is sandwiched between them, her body sliding back and forth with the pressure at her shoulders and her waist. For the first time in her life she really feels like she's dancing, and in her mind, she can imagine it's just her and Catherine there on the floor.

Re: Feedback for The Way She Moves teaotter January 15 2007, 05:56:31 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Feedback for Or it's Me zvi_likes_tv January 6 2007, 14:28:32 UTC

Or it's Me a Harry Potter Harry Potter/Ron Weasley/Hermione Granger story

Re: Feedback for Or it's Me starbrow January 6 2007, 18:00:07 UTC

Oh. My. God. This is /amazing/. I'm in tears right now, but they're tears of joy. If you'd stared straight into my brain and pulled out a Harry Potter story it would have been like this one. I love the way you've linked it back to the Marauders, and the hints about how the Remus/Tonks relationship goes downward after Sirius' death. And I love that you've left it open-ended, about how it's the beginning of hope.

Thank you so much for this story. I am in sheer awe.

Re: Feedback for Or it's Me inalasahl January 7 2007, 07:04:18 UTC

This was very affecting. So sad, but so joyous too, at the end. I think you did a really good job with the characterizations of all three of them.

Re: Feedback for Or it's Me dariclone September 10 2008, 14:23:43 UTC

That was just wonderful. I liked the way you included the lives of the generation before them, and how they thought *their* lives were going to turn out that way and then they didn't. I also really, *really* liked your writing style.

Feedback for Till Break of Day zvi_likes_tv January 6 2007, 14:30:35 UTC

Till Break of Day a Harry Potter Sirius Black/Remus Lupin/Nymphadora Tonks story

Re: Feedback for Till Break of Day starbrow January 6 2007, 20:32:41 UTC

Oh, that's so lovely -- all three of them together, the way it should have been. Delicious and yummy sex, mmm.

Re: Feedback for Till Break of Day kassrachel January 13 2007, 17:48:40 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for saying so.

Re: Feedback for Till Break of Day valarltd January 6 2007, 22:56:49 UTC

And because I forgot to say it in my comments, thank you, so much!

This was exactly what I wanted: tense, sweet, hot and loving,

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Feedback for Brandy Snifter zvi_likes_tv January 6 2007, 14:36:38 UTC

Brandy Snifter a House, MD Gregory House/Lisa Cuddy/Allison Cameron story

Re: Feedback for Brandy Snifter spatula February 21 2007, 20:38:35 UTC

Excellent! Thank you

Re: Feedback for Brandy Snifter dariclone September 10 2008, 14:41:06 UTC

Heh. Liked the line about the sperm donation. :)

Feedback for Not Always What They Seem zvi_likes_tv January 6 2007, 14:58:02 UTC

Not Always What They Seem a Stargate SG:1 Daniel Jackson/Samantha Carter/Cameron Mitchell story

Re: Feedback for Not Always What They Seem kajikia January 7 2007, 08:00:59 UTC

One thing he knew for sure was that this version of SG1 would never have the kind of relationship that at least one other SG1 did.

But I can hope, right? *g* Also, the sex scene: rawr!

Re: Feedback for Not Always What They Seem advection January 7 2007, 22:51:18 UTC

Oh yeah, I buy it -- at least one of the alt.teams was absolutely like that. Fun!