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FIC: Prompt Response: Star Trek (Reboot)/Labyrinth (Part 6)

Jan 20, 2011 21:32

Title: I Can Never Remember That Line: Part 6

Author: 3988akasha

Fandom: Star Trek (Reboot)/Labyrinth

Pairing: Spock/Kirk

Warning: dubcon Kirk/Jareth

Ratings: R

Spoilers: 2009 Movie & 1986 Labyrinth

Disclaimer: I don't own any of these ideas/people/stories.

Beta: alanndra

Author's Note: Written in response to the prompt from bones_2_be .

Summary: Bones becomes tired of Spock and the ( Read more... )

spock/kirk, fic, st reboot fic

Comments 23

bones_2_be January 21 2011, 04:51:10 UTC

Okay. Spock growling? Hottest. Thing. Ever.

And it kind of kills me that he actually blacked out from the intensity of his emotions. It really underscores the feelings he has for Jim, and that makes me hate it even worse when Jim plays along with Jareth, even for a little bit.

Also? Girl, forget whatever lies you may squeak to me- SO. NOT. OOKY. You do dub-con well, it's sexy as sin while still leaving me feeling dirty all over because it should be Spock.

3988akasha January 21 2011, 05:03:06 UTC

*blushes*

Just glad I'm doing good by your prompt!

For the record, since I've never written dubcon before, I had no basis for comparison...

alanndra January 21 2011, 05:00:30 UTC

Whew! *fans self* That was HOT! I liked it.

I like how Jim managed to get himself out of the situation without really offending Jareth, so Jareth still thinks he has opportunities to seduce Jim. Cause I am guessing things would get really ugly really fast if he honestly thought there was no chance.

Absolutely loved this chapter and can't wait to see the next one!

3988akasha January 21 2011, 05:01:56 UTC

Your icon --- made of win, and totally fits the chapter.

Also, I do try to keep Jim from being too terribly stupid.

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3988akasha January 21 2011, 05:06:23 UTC

I promise to make up for David Bowie interfering with our favorite space couple. Eventually.

spirktrekker42 January 21 2011, 05:03:21 UTC

Awesome update! I love how Jareth provoked an emotional response in Spock... he really hit a nerve.

3988akasha January 21 2011, 05:07:34 UTC

Spock just had to react...he'd been holding back for soooo long. And Jareth was just begging for a reaction.

putigress2012 January 21 2011, 05:06:37 UTC

Poor Spock. All these emotions just overloading his logical self...

Oh, and the Jareth/Jim scene was very interesting. Especially when we know that Jareth and Jim see what happened in two completely different ways.

Keep up the amazing work. I look forward to more. ^_^

3988akasha January 21 2011, 05:10:26 UTC

It was nice to show manipulative!Jim. And to maybe show that Jareth isn't quite as "King of the Planet" as he thinks he is.