Oh good lord... honey, this is absolutely *scorching* hot. Forgive my crudeness but I have such a lady boner now having read this gorgeously-erotic fic... oh my god... yeah, I pretty much feel like Wes here:
Seriously, BB, this is so freakin' hot! Michael is absolutely smolderingly-sexy in this... god... I was melting reading how he was so lovingly dominant - the way he was beautifully forceful but gentle with it with the way he handled James, the sweet words of affection (I have such a kink for Michael calling James 'baby' and 'love' in that sexy voice of his... damn, that's hot! I love how he makes sure James is comfortable with their scene - both before and after.
And I love the way James practically melts for him, submitting so sweetly under him (so erotic!). You so vividly capture the passion and intensity and desire and affection between them, which only adds to the power and delicious eroticism of this fic.
God, I adore this hot, lovely story, BB! Gorgeous! <3333333333333 :D :D :D
I really have a thing for BDSM, and wanted this to be as "healthy" as possible given that it was an underage fic. I wanted it to really be about them caring for and about each other...the hot sex of course helps!
Seriously, BB, this is so freakin' hot! Michael is absolutely smolderingly-sexy in this... god... I was melting reading how he was so lovingly dominant - the way he was beautifully forceful but gentle with it with the way he handled James, the sweet words of affection (I have such a kink for Michael calling James 'baby' and 'love' in that sexy voice of his... damn, that's hot! I love how he makes sure James is comfortable with their scene - both before and after.
And I love the way James practically melts for him, submitting so sweetly under him (so erotic!). You so vividly capture the passion and intensity and desire and affection between them, which only adds to the power and delicious eroticism of this fic.
God, I adore this hot, lovely story, BB! Gorgeous! <3333333333333 :D :D :D
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I really have a thing for BDSM, and wanted this to be as "healthy" as possible given that it was an underage fic. I wanted it to really be about them caring for and about each other...the hot sex of course helps!
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