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[September 5] [Pokémon] Trenches

Sep 05, 2011 23:26

Title: Trenches
Day/Theme: September 5 - all your cities I will burn
Series: Pokemon gameverse
Character/Pairing: Red
Words: 175
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Narrator is supposed to be Giovanni. But whatever.

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beeskies September 6 2011, 08:47:52 UTC

this is ...this is really beautiful. i love how you describe a setting that's so ugly, and that could happen in case red obliges, and then to see that the seed of corruption is already there. a wonderful case of 'we are not so different after all'.

lovely, lovely job! <3

crystalpool September 9 2011, 06:55:30 UTC

Thanks! I feel like it's one of my best as well. <33