[Feb 8th] [Magic Kaitou] Murderer: First Offensive Front [Random Scene]

Feb 08, 2008 21:47

Title: Murderer: First Offensive Front [Random Scene]
Day/Theme: February 8 - "Accursed be he that first invented war"
Series: Magic Kaitou
Character/Pairing: Kuroba Kaito, Hakuba Saguru, Jodie Starling, that old guy, Takagi Wataru, Satou Miwako, Megure-keibu, Kudo Shinichi
Rating: PG-13

'Is there anyone left that you /do/ trust, Kuroba, or is everyone around you wearing black in your mind?' )

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minunxplusleotp February 9 2008, 13:53:15 UTC
OMg. I don't know if I can even begin to think of a another part to this story. It is so friggin' awesome! Poor Kaito~ *snuggles Kaito*

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jeva_chan February 10 2008, 03:50:21 UTC
... you guys are like ninja. I know for a fact I didn't post this on my LJ yet.

But besides that ahahahaha. I wasn't even planning for the Murderer series to be longer than 3 fics and uh... it's looking to be longer than 3 fics now. D'oh!

But yes~ Poor Kaito~

Glad you enjoyed!

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juneaddams February 9 2008, 18:25:14 UTC
Kaito was right on one point; Shinichi wasn't there, and by his absence he lost the moral authority to vouch for the officers' credibility. To me, anyway.

And Hakuba, well, what a tight position to be in. He pretty much had to be the equilibrium point amidst all the mess. I just hope the syndicate wouldn't hurt him just to screw with Kaito's sanity some more.

The whole "seeing blacks everywhere" that Shinichi offered got me hoping for a possible Ai-Kaito conversation in future chapters. She's the only other person who knows first-hand what it feels to lose loved ones at the hands of the syndicate, and to feel guilt for the crime of taking others' lives, although in her case the act was indirect.

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jeva_chan February 10 2008, 03:53:42 UTC
I just hope the syndicate wouldn't hurt him just to screw with Kaito's sanity some more.

...

*is not plotting anything, what are you talking about?*

You really shouldn't put ideas in my head. *snerk* But srsly, I dunno if they will or not. But it's an interesting idea...

...a possible Ai-Kaito conversation in future chapters.

Actually, there is going to be one in the 3rd fic, before the scene with Vermouth and the getting shot in the back, which comes before he gets ensnared by the BO and has to get himself out again, which happens before the scene with Kaito Hakuba and Aoko which occurs before this scene.

... I have a timeline for it on that post with the other fics' chronological orders...

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candy__chan February 10 2008, 04:48:53 UTC
Loooooooooove love love love love~ ♥♥♥

*is not too coherent right now, yesh* *KNITTING NEEDLES GO CLICKY CLICKY!!*

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fyliwionvilyaer February 11 2008, 03:22:35 UTC
Meeep!! Yay more intrigue!! *cuddles poor kaito*

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