Fic: Shift, Part 2 (Jim/Pam) M

Dec 18, 2007 19:57

Married.

Married.

She’s married.

He focuses on these words, mentally reciting them until they blur into an unfamiliar collection of syllables. But as hard as he tries, the phrase still doesn’t lose meaning, and married still sounds like a particularly ugly adjective. He never thought he’d miss engaged, but now all he wants is to ( Read more... )

the office, jim/pam, fanfic

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hippie_lover December 19 2007, 05:15:01 UTC
*hugs your knees* Oh, the angst! The potential happiness! You seriously made my heart feel like breaking for Jim all alone and not-drunk in Australia. <3

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30percent December 22 2007, 23:47:58 UTC
I know, poor Jim! Sorry about your heart. But, at least things are looking up for him, right? Thanks for commenting. :)

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lipscoldasclay December 19 2007, 06:31:25 UTC
Awe! I loved that Pam noticed that Jim lost weight.
I already love this. <3

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30percent December 22 2007, 23:49:36 UTC
Thanks. :) John Krasinski *did* noticeably lose weight between S2 and S3, so I figured I'd work that into the story and have Pam notice. Glad you liked it!

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thirteenmirrors December 19 2007, 18:05:21 UTC
Yay! I was so happy to see this updated. Angsty Jim makes my world go 'round, and you nailed it. And the scene with Jim and Pam is 100% perfect. I like that they don't just jump into a relationship, that she's conscious that she can't be what he needs yet. And what a great way to end it! I can't wait for more. :)

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30percent December 22 2007, 23:57:08 UTC
Thanks so much, thirteenmirrors! Yeah, as happy as the thought of her dumping Roy and running straight into Jim's arms is, there's no way it would be that easy -- and if it were, it would only lead to trouble since I think Pam had a lot of growing up to do. Really glad you liked it! Hope you like the rest. Chapter 3 is in the works.

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accscheer33 December 20 2007, 17:58:11 UTC
Oh goodness, I love this! You write them so tragically beautiful.

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30percent December 22 2007, 23:58:45 UTC
Thanks! They are in a kind of tragic situation, aren't they? I'm glad you liked it.

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dragonflyxeyes December 22 2007, 23:11:40 UTC
I loved it to death!

Tell me you're writing part 3! =]

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30percent December 22 2007, 23:59:21 UTC
Thanks dragonflyxeyes. Yep, chapter 3 is in the works.

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