commandment no. 8

[bluewalk]

So I was in bed, about to fall asleep, when I suddenly realized that it was already October and I have not even finished half the challenge. So I lurched out of bed and threw myself at the laptop. This piece had been sitting around on my hard drive for a few weeks, and I finally made myself finish it at 4 in the morning. Hence it being long and

Comments

[postingwhore]

I rather like this AU you've done! Any chance of more? XD (Or any chance of Zoro and Sanji eventually succumbing to Luffy's charm? ;p)

[bluewalk]

Why, thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it! If inspiration strikes again, I certainly will be the last one to object to more XD (If we completely ignore the outrageously tragic ending in the anime, I think that would be the next most likely scenario :Db)

[captainkai]

I squeed when I saw this was the mafia AU.

Two paragraphs in and I have chills. Well done.

even if the order is to baby-sit
Bahahahahah!

...How is you can take a creep scene and make it adorable?

...Again, I am speechless. Your writing skills are stunning.

[bluewalk]

THE MAFIA!AU IS A GUILTY PLEASURE, I MUST ADMIT.

You leave me speechless. Again, thank you thank you thank you for all these kind words.

Gin also tips his hat to you in appreciation &hearts

[captainkai]

No thanks necessary, sweets. I am just speaking honestly.

[pesn_placha]

Awww, a bit of fluff for the deadly demon <333
SanGin fic? Amazing. SanGin fic from you? Priceless.
Gin's love for Sanji is so heartbreakingly sweet: quiet, unquestioning, and devoted to the very end. And that game Gin played with Chopper was all sorts of awesome XDD
knows how to wrap the night shadows around himself like a second skin.
knows that the Don wears his watch on the last notch and still it slides down his wrist.
YOU JUST KILLED ME TO DEATH WITH THEIR BEAUTY
He knows that recently the Don smokes more and more and eats less and less, knows that the Don is so fond of saying, "You have to die of something"
WAT. Please tell me Sanjino isn't dying ;_;

[bluewalk]

GIN IS ONE IN A MILLION. You don't get men like Gin washing up on your shores everyday, Don Sanjino. Cherish him!

I am so so so so SO happy that you noted the line about Sanji(no)'s watch, because I tried so hard to show without telling and AUGH I'M SO GLAD THAT LINE HAD ITS INTENDED EFFECT. You're so awesome ;3;

He's.......... he's a very heavy smoker. Those people don't tend to live very healthy or long lives XDDDD..... >_>