Finally finished this one!

[slowsunrise]

Title: The Mysterious Bottle
Theme: # 2 Promise - Set 1
Claim: Zoro/Sanji
Words: 1127
Rating: PG
Warnings: One or two foul words
Disclaimer: I own One Piece, not...
Notes: A sequel to this, but I guess you can read it separatly. Dedicated to mishagirl as she said that the other fic needed a sequel!

Comments

[greensan]

If you've made the sand pink and wrote 'sea' and 'to', then this would have been perfect.

Now, it's only fucking wonderful >w

[slowsunrise]

Whyyyy, oh, whhhyyy, didn't I make the sand pink? *fails* Hmm, typos? POINT THEM OUT! D8

Yay, thanks~

[greensan]

... D-don't kill me! oo''

It's in the two last paragraphs!! *runs for her life*

[slowsunrise]

I blame the late hour! XD *fixed*
Heyy, I won't kill you! It's good when you point those things out!

[otaku490]

I've found another small mistake XP....."He stood up in the sand after he had put on his hoes again" should be "He stood up in the sand after he had put on his shoes again".....

however, good work! XD

[slowsunrise]

Guuuuh, *feels so stupid* XD I hate the mistakes word check can't fix...

However; thanks!