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Jun 30, 2010 23:23

Title: First Mate
Theme: Set #3 - Brother
Claim: Zoro
Words: 3815
Rating: PG
Warnings: Post-current-canon fic. Swearing. Third of an arc beginning with " Promised Farewell". Includes references to the Old Nemesis arc and the Adventures of Young Roronoa Zoro arc. And, I descended into a spot of Rurouni Kenshin-inspired crack in the end.
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c_callosum - set#03 - zoro

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quarantineabra July 1 2010, 03:43:52 UTC

Dude, I would PAY to see Nami chewing Mihawk out over anything! Mihawk was totally awesome by the way.
And WAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! I got all choked up reading this! -rubs eyes-

c_callosum July 1 2010, 05:01:57 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad I managed to portray Mihawk all right! (One thing about 30 Pieces is that it really forces me to make use of more characters than I normally would, so this is my first time writing most of them!)

I hope that was choked up in a good way! XP

quarantineabra July 1 2010, 18:12:05 UTC

I'd be terrified of trying to write Mihawk myself. xP
It was, don't worry.

slowsunrise July 2 2010, 13:33:59 UTC

Whaaaaaa ;wwwww; Lu-Luffy~ And everybody else! *cryyyyyy* Bwaaaeaaa!

But wow, *imagines Zoro in Mihawk's hat and starts laughing instead*

c_callosum July 2 2010, 17:50:11 UTC

Heh, thanks, glad it made you laugh :-)

zelda_addict July 9 2010, 05:52:24 UTC

This was great... I love everybody altering their dreams and knocking some sense back into Zoro!

I also really enjoyed Mihawk insisting he had to hand something off and Zoro thinking how much he really did not want any of Mihawk's clothes! XD Now that Zoro took the dagger in the cross necklace, what will Mihawk use to eat takoyaki? D:

Nice work!

c_callosum July 9 2010, 16:14:30 UTC

Thanks! It's actually missing a bit, with Dragon, because I didn't have the time and hadn't thought it through completely...but I'm glad it was okay despite that!

Does Mihawk really use that thing to eat takoyaki where where I gotta see this!

zelda_addict July 10 2010, 02:42:26 UTC

http://mangastream.com/read/one_piece/29274149/2

Behold! It's both a little funny and rather disturbingly unsanitary... XP

c_callosum July 11 2010, 01:03:39 UTC

Wahahaha I totally forgot about that. Zoro you just screwed up Mihawk's dietary habits for life!

izumithemoogle July 10 2010, 04:46:27 UTC

HOORAY!! I LOVED IT!!
Everyone was wonderfully in character, as always with your marvelous ficelts! ^0^
I liked how you had Zoro's 'return' be much like Usopp's; very realistic! And I also liked how awkward you made Zoro when he was apologizing. Poor guy!
The bit about everyone having 'new' dreams was SO CUTE!! *squee* I loved it!! >.< (Now that I think about it... What didn't I love??)
Mihawk and Zoro's conversation was pure WIN! ^^ Amazing! Zoro with Mihawk's cape or hat... Hoo yeah. Sanji would bust a gut. Or two. XP
Shocking news! The only person in the world Hawk-Eye Mihawk is afraid of is an orange-haired pissed off Navigator!! (XD)
Awesome, awesome, awesome! Loved it to death! :D

c_callosum July 11 2010, 01:40:03 UTC

:-D Thank you! I'm SO glad you found Zoro's return realistic, I spent quite a lot of time deciding how to write his apology, and then I ran out of time and I was like just write SOMETHING, so I'm really glad you found it in character!

Haha, yeah, Nami can scare ANYONE.

Thank you so much! :-D

Fiiiinally velkynkarma September 20 2011, 01:13:48 UTC

...An ending! Your FF.net updates on this kinda died right in the middle of an enormous cliffhanger and it made me saaad.

But this makes me happy and I am now satisfied :)

Zoro is so terrible at apologizing. Although I totally get where he's coming from. But still. He could do a better job of it :P

Mihawk's insistence on handing over his cloak at first also reminds me very much of Kenshin after he learned his final move from Hiko Seijuro. Since he pretty much had the same reaction as Zoro here, that he'd look completely ridiculous in the inherited cloak. XD

(Also hello, I'm on this side now XD)

~VelkynKarma

Re: Fiiiinally c_callosum September 21 2011, 02:29:25 UTC

Ah...my apologies :-P I actually didn't really like the beginning of this fic very much, and wanted to overhaul it for the ff.net version. Also people seemed to be expecting epic-ness, which the above certainly isn't - it was written in like a couple of hours on the day of the deadline for Gold Roger on here. Anyway, so I started revising it but wound up overreaching myself trying to conjure up epic-ness and just burned out instead, which is why nothing has appeared over there for ever. Thanks for remembering it and looking it up though! ^^

Yup, the cloak thing was totally stolen from RK...it just amused me to picture Zoro wearing Mihawk attire :-P