Title: Aftermath of it all
Theme: Set #3 - Steel
Claim: Zoro
Words: 1508
Rating: PG
Warnings: Language, Sanji, language! Also, continues from
Return of an old nemesis and
Vengeance on the avenger, so you'll want to read those first if you haven't already.
Disclaimers: I don't own One Piece.
Acknowledgments: Last in a series inspired by
a pic by
sybile, and
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This was great!
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If you haven't written it yet, how can it be bad? Write it! Write it! I'm sure it'll be good anyway!
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Love the Zoro Sanji interaction! Now I want to see a picture of Sanji cutting fish with Zoro's swords.
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I was waiting for the experiment to backfire, and it was just perfectly ironic that Chopper was the one to catch them at it...
I'm also still giggling about Sanji's "vicious assault from the emergency food supply." XD
Good luck with that jet lag!
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Indeed! I wrote a post-TB story once about everyone's reactions to what Zoro did and Sanji was the second hardest because it was really hard for me to justify him being mad at Zoro when in all likelihood, he would have done the same thing even if Zoro hadn't volunteered first.
The dialogue got better after you beta-ed it, so thank you!
I wanted to bring it back to Chopper to balance with the first fic, and it just made sense when they were doing something so dangerous and naturally idiotic...
I'm glad you liked that line! I'm particularly fond of it myself :-)
Thanks! My sleep patterns are rather erratic right now but I'm hoping they'll right themselves soon! (BTW, the machine-gun frogs were at it last night, not that they really bother me anymore :-P)
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