Comments | 30_kisses: [Fruits Basket] Haru/Rin, #1

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[Fruits Basket] Haru/Rin, #1

Jul 23, 2008 16:36

Title: Better Left Alone
Author: Ysabet MacFarlane umadoshiPairing: Sohma Hatsuharu and Sohma Isuzu (Rin ( Read more... )

Comments 10

sakuraofdreams July 23 2008, 19:56:28 UTC

Breathtaking work as always, Ysabet-san! I was wondering how you would write the kiss for the first theme, and it was all I though it would be and more. Keep up the great work!
And as for the title, I think it fits very well. Good job. -_^
~Sakura-chan

umadoshi July 24 2008, 00:29:58 UTC

Thank you! This one took a ridiculously long time to finish, given how short it is, but it seems to work well enough. ^_^

ficwize July 23 2008, 20:16:52 UTC

I loved this, as always. It was heartbreaking and sad, but it also was a silent testiment to the characters' strength and determination.

umadoshi July 24 2008, 00:32:08 UTC

Thanks so much! It always makes me a little sad writing fics set around this point in the series. (But I keep doing it... ^^)

ginny_t July 23 2008, 23:46:57 UTC

ack. Poor Rin. Poor Haru. I want to hug them both, but it wouldn't go well in either case.

umadoshi July 24 2008, 00:32:41 UTC

Yeah. :/ So very true. And yet they both need it.

coastal_spirit July 26 2008, 01:35:31 UTC

They are so anguished, and I feel for both of them. As always, beautifully written, beautifully portrayed.

umadoshi July 26 2008, 01:52:09 UTC

Thank you! ^_^ This is one that I was tweaking for so long that I don't really see it for itself anymore, so I'm glad it seems to be working.

coastal_spirit July 26 2008, 16:20:05 UTC

I do so always look forward to your fic. You write these two like no one else does.

coastal_spirit July 26 2008, 16:21:01 UTC

Argh. And that would have been me. I forgot that I wasn't logged on.