Listen (Princess Tutu, Fakir/Ahiru, #17)

Aug 01, 2007 01:20

Title: Listen
Author: elektra3
Fandom: Princess Tutu
Pairing: Fakir/Ahiru
Theme: #17, kHz
Disclaimer: Princess Tutu belongs to Ikuko Itoh.
Note: This takes place in Episode 21, during Fakir's acid trip... er, convo with the oak tree.

There are things that he should be caring about right now. )

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mangaka_chan August 4 2007, 20:14:03 UTC
Nice enterpretation of the acid trip when Fakir was inside the Oak Tree. We didn't hear that much of his thoughts while he was in there and it's interesting to see what his thoughts might've been like. :)

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haleysings August 4 2007, 20:31:33 UTC
Ooh, that's lovely. I've never read any fanfiction that depicts what Fakir was thinking and feeling in the tree, and this was done really, really well. (It makes me wish more PT fanfic authors focused on moments within the series as well as "Fakir writes a story that turns Ahiru back into a girl and etc etc true love".) I liked how there was a lot of emotion present in the piece, even though the overall tone was of peaceful resignation...and I particularly like where Tutu/Ahiru breaks through, since it feels like it's sort of offsetting the beat of his thoughts. (Like in A Wrinkle in Time when the heroine has to constantly recite something nonrhythmic to fight against the soothing, hypnotic power of that...giant brain thing. It's been a while since I read the book.)

...That sort of rambled on, but my main point is, I love it yet again. Thank you for continuing to write these. <3

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peacewish August 5 2007, 14:12:21 UTC
Good job!

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