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23 - Evergreen - Bus Gamer - 4/30

Jan 19, 2007 13:11

Title: Evergreen
Author/Artist: redex
Pairing: Nobu/Toki plus Kazu in the background
Fandom: Bus Gamer
Theme: Fyre's 23
Ratings/Warnings: Finally, some raw sex (not quite porn, though) and language. NC-17 or whatever. Oh, and second person. I don't do it on purpose, I promise.

( I don't use fucking Word, I use Notepad! Represent! )

bus gamer, mishiba toki, nakajyo nobuto, saitoh kazuo, !themefyre, fyre23

Comments 7

tresa_cho January 19 2007, 17:49:13 UTC

*melts* still not too much a fan of the second person, but i still love you for doing bus gamer. amazing. i love the raw, gritty description here that fits with canon. nice work.

infinite_beauty January 23 2007, 01:06:41 UTC

I love both your Bus Gamer fics and your Dogs and Samurai Champloo icons.
Huzzah for Bus Gamer smut!

redex January 23 2007, 01:19:18 UTC

I'm glad you liked them, though I didn't make the icons, so you should go and grab them from the lovely people who did make them. ♥

fyretoppaaa March 16 2007, 08:57:28 UTC

The theme seemed just slightly forced, but we won't fault you for that, especially since you gave us such nice lovely smut. *_*;; Turning laughter into screams of pleasure = quite sexy and Nobuto thing to do. Fufufu, and seeing him from another POV is nice as well. ;o P.S. Toki makes me lol with how much of a uke he is. |D

redex March 16 2007, 21:29:26 UTC

Forced? What? XD;;;; Yeah. I got the idea for the story and then kind of just threw it in there at the beginning and the end. Someone is a little obsessed with Nubuto-kun, no? X3 I can't blame you. You should go to Aethereality if you haven't already and pick up some of the lovely scans of the artbooks. There's a particularly sexy one of Nubuto... here. ♥

Oh, definitely. At the end of the book when they're in the beer garden one of the bad guys grabs him pretending to be drunk and says "Oh, you're a pretty one aren't you?". And then I had to write something about it.

fyretoppaaa March 17 2007, 03:32:08 UTC

Heeeh, yeah, that's what I meant, it felt thrown in there. ;O *pets* And yes, I am obsessed, WHY DO YOU ASK. >___>;; Well, I like all of them, Nobuto is just funnest in the sex arena. |3 Annnnnnd mrawr to that pic~ ★

Ahhhh, yes, I remember that one. XDDDDD Hee! I like him against a wall. ;3

redex March 17 2007, 15:47:35 UTC

He is definitely the most fun to write when it comes to sex, but you also know the least about him so that gives him plenty of appeal.

Most pretty boys look quite good up against walls. Funny how that works out.