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May 01, 2007 20:24

About a month ago I wrote one of the most amazing and vulnerable pieces of writing that I've managed to come up with. I warn you guys though, it details a period in my life that was one of the worst. If anything, the ending has hope.

Please give me constructive criticism.

January 13th, 2003 )

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the_raphos May 3 2007, 02:19:51 UTC
It's well written Kar. A little difficult to criticize though, seeing as it's so personal. I know that's not much help, I'm sorry.

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mykerinos May 7 2007, 18:57:57 UTC
First off: wow. I obviously had no idea. I'm really amazed that you managed to deal with everything so well, without the use of any conventional "remedies ( ... )

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