Keep Me Close- Chapter XXVIII

[revuko]

Team: San Jose Sharks
Pairing: Joe Thornton/Evgeni Nabokov
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Not all in San Jose is sunny as the path to the Stanley Cup proves to be as difficult as ever; falling in love might be the simplest task on this year’s agenda.
Editor: sherlockelly. Thank you so much, as always! She is the hardest working editor that an author will ever have the

Comments

[konishi_zen]

Yeeeesss! Just yes! It was still a good chapter, with Devin basically blackmailing them to come. It made me giggle a bit when he asked who was the "pitcher/Catcher" as my friends put it. :D! and Nabby being all flustered and offended. The Nabby in my mind turned all chibi and pink. Hah! Since I have a dirty mind, I can't help but to think "Threesome?" which would be totally hot.

So yeah, that's my review! :3!

[revuko]

Hahaha! It was quite fun to put these too in the most awkward situations, glad you enjoy it as well :D

And threesome? How passé! Devin's mind has most definitely gone far beyond that possibility ;) Dirty minds think alike, I suppose (you, me, and Devin know where it's at)!

Now what could possibly happen at Devin's later? hmm... I wonder...

[konishi_zen]

I think it's good that you do that, because it gives the story balance. It also gives their relationship more weight and a more realistic feel, because IRL, relationships can be quite silly sometimes. :D!

*laughs* I am thinking if a three-some is passe, then an orgy and toys would be the next logical step and Devin would for sure deliver. ;D!

Am I close? XD!

[revuko]

yay! ~balance~

Just because Devin's thought of it, doesn't mean that mr. stick-in-the-mud-nabokov would let it happen ;) Although...

Not close, but not TOO far off! Next chapter to see what I mean? I think so!

[gothickaoru]

I thiiiink you're amazing. I didnt stop laughing throught this whole chapter. And I love how Evgeni got all mad when Devin called him the 'girl'.

[canucksrule1944]

Lols. So awesome. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

[oohlala]

first, icon.

second. devin is clearly winning at life. and is gay. and there better be some sex in the next chapter, or i might just have to write some jamie mcginn into this story. just saying.

[revuko]

first, GIVE ME THAT ICON RIGHT NOW WOMAN. What about the dougie one? Me wants, badly!

second, i know, right??? Devin would totally do it, too. And next chapter, I promise, it's gonna be soooooooo much better than sex ;) too bad you can't read it, the chapter being on your computer after all

[oohlala]

oh, you mean this one?
i made them all, i just ned to post them ;)

[revuko]

Lol that is so great. YOU are so great. Care to spam this page with all of them?

[hkylvr]

Oh my God. My mouth was open the entire conversation with Devin. lol I was like, "You little blackmailer ..." He is probably the funniest character ever.

“Devin’s gay?” Evgeni whispered finally as he looked back up, his face crumbling with complete confusion.

I am thinking that, too, but I think you've done a good job of making the answer pretty unclear as of right now.

Glad to hear you're almost done with the next because I'm really, really, REALLY looking forward to seeing what Devin wants with the two at his apartment. Great job as always! I always hope to motivate you into writing more. :D