Flyers Fic

[exigencyexit]

Title: "Bitter Cold"
By: exigencyexit 
Fandom: NHL
Team(s): Philadelphia Flyers
Pairing(s): Mike Richards/Joffrey Lupul
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This story is fiction and not intended to harm or offend anyone. Used for entertainment purposes only.
Warnings: Smut. A little language. Total comfort!fic, btw, so it might be a little sappy. Maybe a little PWP.
Summary:

Comments

[mudd248]

Awww...I really like this. I normally like dialogue but the lack of dialogue in this was perfect.

[exigencyexit]

Thanks :) I figured maybe too much dialogue would end up making it really fluffy and sappy.

[twentyseven]

Aw, Richie is helping Joff cope. LE SIGH. Lovely writing, as usual dear.
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[exigencyexit]

thank you :)

[offthepost]

this is another great. i love all your writing :)

[barbiedoll_x26]

Is that...is that a TATTOO on Richie's arm?! WHAT?! I am in shock. I think I'm more shocked that he's showing off a bit..but...what?! Have we even seen the man shirtless yet? Sorry, I had to ask!

[offthepost]

yesss it is :) it says carpe diem. he did a whole modeling thing for a clothing company. (i honestly forget which one) but he's not the only who has awesome model pictures. scottie upshall and joffrey lupul do some modeling as well. ;)

[barbiedoll_x26]

Yes, eModa! I love the site but haven't seen it in ages, so I had no idea they did it until he changed his FB picture to one of them. Apparently, he also has a hockey stick with a Canadian flag draped across it on his back (I Googled Mike Richards + tattoo haha!). Oh dear..prim Richie has some ink...he definitely has a naughty side going on! I definitely squinted at that picture, thinking, man I need a reply, I can't read his bicep!! Haha!

[barbiedoll_x26]

I really liked this, and the whole lack of dialong like mudd stated. I think if there was a lot of dialogue it'd take away from the whole emotional point of it. And it was just smutty enough without being ridic drawn-out smutty, if that makes sense..it fit with Joff's (and the rest of the team's, I'm sure) sadness.

[exigencyexit]

Thank you! Yes I'm very happy with the lack of dialogue... And that makes sense lol I wanted it to be emotional but you can't deny the smut ;)

[exigencyexit]

thank you! :)