Keep Me Close- Chapter III

Oct 24, 2008 20:38

Team: San Jose Sharks
Pairing: Joe Thornton/Evgeni Nabokov
Rating: PG-13 for language and racism for now (NC-17 later)
Note: (Hopefully) all of the spelling mistakes are intentional, and are there to show accents and to differentiate the characters. And marriages and girlfriends are non-existent for the main characters.
Summary: Not all in San Jose ( Read more... )

team: san jose sharks, evgeni nabokov, rating: pg-13, joe thornton

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neekbreek October 25 2008, 04:09:53 UTC
(omg why are you pissed off, i hope it's not at me, i was just about to reply back to you!!!! :()

anywayssssssssssss, i already told you its perfect and everyone can blame me if there's any spelling mistakes since i should have caught them, what with reading it twice. D:

Girl, it's so good and you're the only person who could get me to read Sharks fic. :P I love it! The end is sooo cute. <3

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revuko October 25 2008, 04:13:50 UTC
Haha, no I'm kinda (not kinda, REALLY) pissed off that we freaking lost to the FLORIDIA PANTHERS. I mean jesus christ... Really?
UGH kill me now. Nabs is not doing too hot at the moment with his 7-6 wins and 4-3 losses D:
What is he doing? *Smacks him*

So! Besides my complaining, that's so sweet of you! The Sharks don't have the biggest fanbase and if I can make you read this means a lot! <333

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neekbreek October 25 2008, 04:15:23 UTC
ohh ok, good. well not good....you know what i mean.
ugh i'm sorry you lost to florida. :( that's always such a piss off. D:
*smacks him too* god nabby D: get with it.

<33333 I LOVE YOU!

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revuko October 25 2008, 04:23:14 UTC
Hahahahaha... Seriously, not many people can make me laugh from a um... post on the internet... (WHAT?) But yeah, Nabby sorta needs to get his act in gear. Oh us and our cute goalies with little confidence in the beginning of the season.
Well... not so much actually, Nabby has the hugest ego I have ever seen.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ps-jpbNvSIQ

"Watch this first save. You see that? You can't score."
:D HA so cute.

<333333 I LOVE YOU MORE

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revuko October 25 2008, 16:51:08 UTC
...Wow... that is one of the most inspirarational reviews I have ever gotten. Making the story as realistic as possible, while still retaining the readers intrest was my goal. Knowing that not only that but the my writing is up to par as well... just thank you so much!
You are definitly one of the reasons I keep updating. Hopefully the chapter can be up soon, and it won't be a filler chapter like this one.

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sherlockelly October 27 2008, 01:47:25 UTC
This story fills me with both happiness and sadness. MORE! SOON! PLEASE!? :D

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revuko October 27 2008, 03:04:08 UTC
Of course! I update for the tiny group that are Shark fans here *webfive for being a Shark fan*. Glad you have conflicting emotions too, that's what I'm aiming for ;)
LOVE your icon by the way

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rin_x_x November 28 2008, 19:23:32 UTC
I'm just catching up now, but I am really going to find Joe trying to take off Nabby's chest protector really hilarious. XD Thats if Nabby doesn't do it himself.

*goes to read next chapter* :3

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