Yes, poor, poor Max. I can't imagine what it'd be like to be him and be where he is right now. O.O. Having Tommy and not being able to fuck? SACRILEGE!
Awwww, Max watching the Sabres (and his lover!) play and cheering for them from the house. That is so cute. ♥ Even though you know I'm a diehard Roy/Vanek type of person, the thought of Max and Thomas getting it on is always hot in my mind. Always. Guh, and when Max told Thomas 'I love you'? I squee'd! So adorable! <3 I don't think your stories are becoming boring or repetitive at all. I'll always love your writing!
yay for boys being all lovely and delicious *sigh*
actually lately i see you writing evolving, i guess would be the right word. especially with the sid/alex fic of yours. i really think that last piece you wrote with them is neat! i think everyone goes through phases where their stuff becomes boring or repetitive, or to mechanical. you can always take the opportunity to think outside the box. maybe ask her to elaborate, that might help you understand why she is saying this, and it might show you something you missed. just my thoughts though. :)
i was glad to see these two, especially when they are being all happy! :)
Fantastic. I was hoping to evolve! Yes, evolving would be the word. Oooh. Awww, thank you! That's one of my most prized stories. I value it a lot. :)
I agree. She says it's the fact that they always sleep after they have sex. I say, um, orgasms take a lot out of you, and they're usually tired anyway! I mean, hell, they're on the ice for a while every day, normally, right.
that doesn'y seem like a very valid reson to me, 99.9% of all fic ends like that. orgasm, boom sleep. sometimes there are a few variations, but that is you basic formula. and besides that hockey players spend copious amounts of time sleeping. i think there are always ways to improve, but you need something valid to go on.
I quite agree. But she's my beta, and I love her to death, so I accept her shortcomings. :)
I said that to her. I was like, they're on the ice for long periods of time almost every day and hockey is very physically taxing, add to that an orgasm, of course they're going to fall asleep. But she's her, so...
I agree. Valid improvement is what I'm looking for. :)
Your writing is always so SQUEE for me! It gets better and better, and I do love me some Max/Tommy. Poor baby was out last night, and I was at the game, and it was very sad indeed.
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Yea for the Max/Tommy Hotness.:D
I don't think there getting repetitive, but thats just me.
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Yeaaaaah.
Fabulous. I hope it's not just you! O.O
And thank you so much!
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I am sure it's not just me.
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*grin* Thanks.
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Even though you know I'm a diehard Roy/Vanek type of person, the thought of Max and Thomas getting it on is always hot in my mind. Always.
Guh, and when Max told Thomas 'I love you'? I squee'd! So adorable! <3
I don't think your stories are becoming boring or repetitive at all. I'll always love your writing!
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I know, I know. UH HUH! So hot. And cute. ;)
*giggle* Gotta love the Max/Tommy love :D
Awwwww, thank you my darling. I'm so glad you still like them!
♥ Loveeeeee you
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♥ Me too! :)
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actually lately i see you writing evolving, i guess would be the right word. especially with the sid/alex fic of yours. i really think that last piece you wrote with them is neat! i think everyone goes through phases where their stuff becomes boring or repetitive, or to mechanical. you can always take the opportunity to think outside the box. maybe ask her to elaborate, that might help you understand why she is saying this, and it might show you something you missed. just my thoughts though. :)
i was glad to see these two, especially when they are being all happy! :)
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Fantastic. I was hoping to evolve! Yes, evolving would be the word. Oooh. Awww, thank you! That's one of my most prized stories. I value it a lot. :)
I agree. She says it's the fact that they always sleep after they have sex. I say, um, orgasms take a lot out of you, and they're usually tired anyway! I mean, hell, they're on the ice for a while every day, normally, right.
I like your thoughts. Share 'em more often. :)
Me too! Happy Max and Tom= Happy Me :D
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I said that to her. I was like, they're on the ice for long periods of time almost every day and hockey is very physically taxing, add to that an orgasm, of course they're going to fall asleep. But she's her, so...
I agree. Valid improvement is what I'm looking for. :)
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I just took a shower. I think I need another.
Your writing is always so SQUEE for me! It gets better and better, and I do love me some Max/Tommy. Poor baby was out last night, and I was at the game, and it was very sad indeed.
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It is? OMG! AWESOME! I'm happy to hear that. Guess my beta's on crack, then. :P
Mmm. Max/Tommy. I love 'em, too, baby.
Awww. I know! We need him! I want him better and I want him better now!
We need him now too. We're about to lose another game. That's SIX! O.O OI.
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i personally think your writing is getting better. i always look forward to what you post!
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Congrats. I'd rather work than watch another train wreck game.
Awwwww, my thanks, sweetheart. :)
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Me too! Oh fuck, we do. I just watched 'em lose their sixth. This is NOT good.
Awwwww, thank you so much!
I sure hope so. I'm always trying to improve, of course, and I love to hear I'm succeeding :)
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