The result of my insomnia

Jun 09, 2007 07:25

Title: You Are My Signal Fire (Part 16 and 17)
Characters: Andrew Raycroft / Ian White, appearances by Matt Stajan, Kyle Wellwood, Daniel Paille and Nathan Paetsch (Buffalo Sabres)
Word Count: a bunch ^.^
Rating: PG-13 at first and then part 17 is NC-17
Disclaimer: I don’t own these players, nor do I know their sexual preferences. The whole thing is ( Read more... )

author: honeybee718, andrew raycroft, rating: pg-13, team: toronto maple leafs, ian white, rating: nc-17

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cali_diva10 June 9 2007, 14:40:38 UTC
Both chapters were really good. And though I’m sure a lot of people won’t agree with me (because we all want our happily ever afters) I think bringing in Dan was a really wise decision, I don’t know what it is but there us something so beautiful about heartbreak…maybe it’s the fact that I know its reality and you have to work hard to keep things you want or maybe its because I’m sure there will be great make up sex (actually it’s a combo of both)

But I’m getting off track here…Great job with these chapters and with the whole story. It’s unfolding really nice.

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honeybee718 June 9 2007, 16:50:16 UTC
haha thank you very much :D I love the drama. Can't have things peaceful for too long, gotta shake things up every once and awhile. And yes...eventually the make-up sex will be brilliant. Hopefully...

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bhavna_grint June 9 2007, 16:46:32 UTC
Are you trying to kill me with the WJC '03-ness?!?! I'm sorry, I have a *little* obssesion with that team...I kinda squeed when I saw the names at the top of your post! *points to icon* ♥

And poor Lara *snuggles* I guess my emo!Lara icon fits, eh? :( Great work!

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honeybee718 June 9 2007, 16:52:13 UTC
That was my favourite WJC team, it had soooooo many amazing players on it. I can't NOT write about them. I actually forgot that Wellwood had been on that team too, until I was looking up people to add ti the story and I was like hey! that's awesome....and thus we have a story. :D

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sabresgirl18 June 9 2007, 19:15:28 UTC
What great chapters! The conflict between the two are amazing right now! I'm a Buffalo fan and I was a little mad when you made Paille the bad guy but after reading the whole thing I don't mind because it made for a great story line. I can't wait to find out how this is going to unfold!

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honeybee718 June 10 2007, 17:21:42 UTC
awwww I love Dan Paille, it was hard to write him in as the "villain" but I needed to use someone...and he's good looking enough to use :D We'll see where it goes because as of right now I have no idea how I want it to go.

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jadedragon_84 June 10 2007, 16:42:44 UTC
that was positively heart breaking! i love the drama, but i'm very, much a happily ever after type to so i hope they make it right again!

lovely work! :)

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honeybee718 June 10 2007, 17:23:54 UTC
I might draw this out for a little bit, just because they've been too happy for too long ^.^ I'm mean like that, but they'll get back together....eventually.

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jadedragon_84 June 10 2007, 18:14:43 UTC
aha, i see you have a prescription for evil pills too.

poor boys.

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forevercanuck July 1 2007, 14:31:37 UTC
Grr, I dont' like this Dan, taking full advantage of the situation. And bad on Ian thinking he'd get some "relief" by doing what he did.

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