i like this chapter in that we see how cameron has sarah sorta figured out but is still trying to understand human relations hips. i like that this chapter was more detailed and focuses on sarah's thoughts. update soon. great fic so far
Glad ye liked it! Yeah, the first chapter was really more of a prologue to set things up. Now I get to go a little more in detail into the characters, and just tell the story.
Wow! this is great! Great concept, great writing and I'm really liking that you're taking your time with them and the story. I'm looking forward to more.
“I understand. You do not wish for them to copulate.” / Sarah almost choked on a mouthful of coffee. - Hahahaha
Rather than quote the whole thing, I'll just say that the entire conversation where Cameron baits Sarah to distract her was hilarious. I think I scared my neighbors, I was laughing so loud.
“When she’s angry, she forgets to be afraid.” - Awwww
He was beginning to worry that he may have made a slight miscalculation… - Hahaha
The whole bit about Sarah realizing John needed to relearn the value of human life, and Cameron figuring that out was really cool.
Freed from her directive to become John’s closest companion, and without a mother’s fears to blind her, Cameron saw the situation objectively. John needed to be allowed to be a hero...and Sarah needed someone else to be strong enough to share some of her responsibilities and fears. / Cameron could be strong …it’s what she had been built for. - Neat!!
“I am a scary robot; I can be the bad guy.” - Awww :(
Hah, the baiting scene was really my favourite one to write in this chapter...I didn't actually plan it, it just sort of flowed onto the page. *G* I've kind of always felt that Cameron did play dumb once in a while...when it suited her. She certainly displays a great deal more understanding at some points than others. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, I hope to get more up soon...It's just way too much fun.
Ok, I'm only half way through, but I just had to comment. The part with Cameron and Sarah, ""It must be a brain tumor'" dialogue was amusing as hell. I just finished reading Green Grass Running Water....I noticed your avatar icon thing looks to be a coyote...So I just wanted to mention that I think your writing manifested a bit of the Coyote trickster figure's mischief; Much admired. xD
GAH! I love the story, but it's always so painful when sarah makes me want to smack her upside the head. Great portrayl of the characters, can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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Yeah, the first chapter was really more of a prologue to set things up. Now I get to go a little more in detail into the characters, and just tell the story.
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“I understand. You do not wish for them to copulate.” / Sarah almost choked on a mouthful of coffee. - Hahahaha
Rather than quote the whole thing, I'll just say that the entire conversation where Cameron baits Sarah to distract her was hilarious. I think I scared my neighbors, I was laughing so loud.
“When she’s angry, she forgets to be afraid.” - Awwww
He was beginning to worry that he may have made a slight miscalculation… - Hahaha
The whole bit about Sarah realizing John needed to relearn the value of human life, and Cameron figuring that out was really cool.
Freed from her directive to become John’s closest companion, and without a mother’s fears to blind her, Cameron saw the situation objectively. John needed to be allowed to be a hero...and Sarah needed someone else to be strong enough to share some of her responsibilities and fears. / Cameron could be strong …it’s what she had been built for. - Neat!!
“I am a scary robot; I can be the bad guy.” - Awww :(
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*G* I've kind of always felt that Cameron did play dumb once in a while...when it suited her. She certainly displays a great deal more understanding at some points than others.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter, I hope to get more up soon...It's just way too much fun.
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Yup, coyote through and through, I love the tricky mischief teasing.
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