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2_4_joy

Moonlight Discoveries - a Remus/Sirius ficlet

Nov 29, 2007 14:38

Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing/Characters: Harry, Remus/Sirius
Summary: Wandering Grimmauld Place at night, Harry learns something new about his godfather.
Challenge #104 Seventh Sentence for 30minutefics
Rating: PG-13 for mild sexual content
( Moonlight Discoveries )

slash, harry potter

Comments 7

passthesky November 30 2007, 18:45:58 UTC

That's so lovely and cute! I loved Harry's POV, I can totally imagine his initial confusion. XD

brighty18 November 30 2007, 19:43:46 UTC

Oh, this was so lovely! And very nicely done! And your Harry is so very in character. I mean this about sums it up for the kid:
He had not known either of them were gay. He’d never really thought about it, to be honest... But the more he thought about it, the more Harry found that he was glad. They were both so lonely, and they had been through so much. At last, Harry smiled and returned to his room. Now he knew that when he returned to Hogwarts tomorrow, Sirius would not be alone after all.

I mean, Harry does exactly NOTICE things, does he? He never really THINKS about what adults are doing in their personal lives. And that's fine. But I really think that he would be glad and relieved that two of his favorite people in the world would be happy together.

Ah, but don't you wonder of Remus and Sirius had any clue?

Again, this was great!

2_4_joy December 1 2007, 06:13:20 UTC

Sadly, oblivious Harry is the most canon of all.

And I ran out of time for the 30 minute challenge before I decided whether I wanted Harry to be caught looking, so I just left it ambiguous.

glad you liked it

militantstemmed December 1 2007, 01:39:20 UTC

nicely done. I really like remus/sirius even though I like tonks a lot too. Is this set during book 5? I wasn't really sure. Not that it's got to be set during a book.

2_4_joy December 1 2007, 06:06:46 UTC

I was thinking of the last night of the Christmas holidays from Order of the Pheonix, yes. When Harry and the Weasley kids are portkeyed to Grimmaud Place after Harry dreams the attack on Arthur and they end up staying for the entire holidays.

militantstemmed December 1 2007, 16:01:42 UTC

cool, that's what i thought

quartetship December 1 2007, 03:40:28 UTC

Yay! Loverly! I liek that Harry's a bit oblivious, it's very keeping with canon. ~lol~ But the sweetness of his sentiments in the end are adorable. Good job :)