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2_4_joy

Temptation on the whispering breeze - a Sirius drabble

Jan 15, 2008 15:01

Fandom: Harry Potter
Character: Sirius Black
Summary: In Azkaban, the only escape from suffering is in dreams.
Challenge: Snow for Sirius100
Rating: G
( Temptation on the whispering breeze by 2_4_Joy )

drabble, harry potter

Comments 7

militantstemmed January 15 2008, 23:26:32 UTC

that last line is a sucker punch, if sucker punches were nice, metaphorical things

2_4_joy January 16 2008, 20:23:09 UTC

Metaphoric, yes. But nice?

militantstemmed January 17 2008, 04:34:11 UTC

yeah, nice. Like "hurts so good" kind of nice.

masha_shamraeva January 16 2008, 19:23:15 UTC

Gorgeous.

2_4_joy January 16 2008, 20:21:24 UTC

Thanks. Glad you liked.

akamine_chan January 23 2008, 06:11:05 UTC

His paws left masterpieces in the snow, intricate patterns only he understood.

Such an evocative line. Wonderful.

2_4_joy January 23 2008, 18:43:14 UTC

;) My favorite line too. That's what came from the prompt. Everything else was an excuse to get to that line. Glad you liked.