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Restraint 2/2

Apr 04, 2009 14:15

Title: "Restraint 2/2 ( Read more... )

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ligeria April 4 2009, 18:39:51 UTC

If only we could see something like this on Monday! I'm glad you didn't give us the angsty ending. :)

leigh57 April 4 2009, 19:51:05 UTC

Oh I so wussed out. It was supposed to be angsty. Someday I'm gonna buck up and write a REAL angst fic. But it couldn't be this week because I just can't deal. Thanks:)

catch22girl April 4 2009, 18:42:51 UTC

*FLAILS IN AWE*

OMG. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. That story about the duck? The tremors? The dunkin donuts? OW WAUGH AMAZING. Your Renee is beyond words fantastic. You pull me so deeply into her head.

And when he could still smile *wibbles*.

I could start quoting favorite sections but I'm gonna stick with this because it's so perfect:

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leigh57 April 4 2009, 20:20:17 UTC

Awww, thanks, especially about the Renee part! :) I really really tried to write an angst fic. I truly did! I think perhaps it is not in me. I don't know. Maybe over the summer I'll manage one. But for now I can't deal, so this is what came out. I'm to the point where I'm halfway not even looking forward to Monday's show because I think it will make me feel worse. And back to the wibble. Meh.

marinw April 4 2009, 18:51:30 UTC

Looks like someone has had enough with the hopelessness!

Wonderfull writing as always.

Makes so much sence that when (Not, IF, but WHEN) they find the antidote they won't have time to test it.

And I love how Renee takes responsbilty for Jack's care. That is so like her.

leigh57 April 4 2009, 20:22:29 UTC

WHEN not IF, huh? *crosses fingers* Yeah, I thought I could pull off the hopelessness, but notsomuch, it would seem. I was really worried about crossing the line there with Renee, but I figured if she actually thought he was dying she might let certain things slide. Oy *taps fingers dreading Monday*

kathryn1193 April 4 2009, 22:02:07 UTC

Ooh loved it. Just like the first chapter! Now that we've saved Jack, can we have Jack/Renee sex?? Please? :D

leigh57 April 4 2009, 23:30:17 UTC

Thanks! But ack. Sex again? lol. Well clearly not in this fic, as it is finished. In the one that's planning itself in my head right now, we'll see. I'm not at all sure where it's going yet.

anniefan32 April 4 2009, 23:37:11 UTC

Absolutely LOVED it! You portray Renee very well in my opinion. Angsty fics are good, but right now I am extremely content with a hopeful ending =D. You are definately helping me get by until Monday! Great stuff! Keep it up!

leigh57 April 5 2009, 01:59:54 UTC

Wow. Thanks so much! I think I had to give myself some hope, hence the lack of an angsty ending. Probably a huge copout. More coming, but I'm not sure when. Writing in this forum is *hard*, because everything goes AU inside a week. I love it though:)

anniefan32 April 5 2009, 02:04:14 UTC

The copout is perfectly fine! I think we all need some hope right now. I can't even imagine how hard it is to write during the season like this when you just have to go week by week knowing what is going on, but for people like me, I love the fics inbetween Mondays. Like right now, they give me hope when it seems like there is none =D