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[21enemies]

Title: Brutal Love [19]
Author: Molly
Pairing: Billie/Mike
Summary: Hands hanging loosely at his sides, extensions of sagged shoulders, Mike said, quietly, “I'm gonna fight, Billie.”
Previous parts: located here
Notes: Dedicating this to strychninetwist and the_wondering_1. Appreciation and love to you both xx

Comments

[strychninetwist]

I got wet eyes at this chapter. I like the difference in Billie when he's trying to keep Olivia oblivious and happy to when he's alone with Mike. I really like how raw the emotions have been too
I feel like I should give you some constructive criticism instead of just the endless compliments but I really can't see anything that could be better, especially not in this chapter

Thank you for the dedication, I'm flattered :) xx

[21enemies]

I'm glad you liked the chapter! I'm doing my best to make it as realistic as possible, despite the fact that it's full of impossibilities ;)

You're quite welcome! Thank you for your continued feedback and for reading!