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[Gekkou Hayate] [midnightdiddle]

May 12, 2006 00:00

Title: Lucky Boy
Author: midnightdiddle
Character: Gekkou Hayate
Rating: PG

( Hayate is very lucky. If only he knew how lucky he is. )

gekko hayate

Comments 22

sunhorizon May 12 2006, 06:23:09 UTC

This is gorgeous.

midnightdiddle May 12 2006, 10:11:06 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

sunhorizon May 12 2006, 14:09:53 UTC

i know you you write with cat and sarah over at green tea! XDDD

midnightdiddle May 12 2006, 17:45:33 UTC

Yes, I do! *grin*

akashacatbat May 12 2006, 07:09:02 UTC

Oh my gosh, that gave me goosebumps. Well done, as always.

midnightdiddle May 12 2006, 10:11:32 UTC

Hehe. Thank you! *glomps*

pisceanduality May 12 2006, 07:27:23 UTC

Yes! Hayate! ^_^
This is very well written! I love every word!

midnightdiddle May 12 2006, 10:12:07 UTC

Yes, Hayate!

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it. ^__^

This is lovely and ironic gsyh May 12 2006, 08:30:45 UTC

I've always thought, that Hayate was an extremely unlucky character, to be caught like that, to die so suddenly, when he was so young, so briefly after his appearance. That was a long time ago though, at the beginning of the series...was his the first death of a Konoha ninja we've seen? After the Kakashi Gaiden arch...relatively, I guess, it can be looked at, that Hayate is kinda lucky.

Re: This is lovely and ironic midnightdiddle May 13 2006, 20:15:55 UTC

Ah, thank you. He is lucky, in a way, that he even lived as long as he did, but he's also very unlucky. The lives of poor ninja. :) And I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you!

heronite May 12 2006, 12:15:20 UTC

I loved it! This was an extremely well-written ficlet about Hayate. Poor guy. And it was a really nice conclusion. Hayate at 4 days old is lucky, because he didn't know what was in store for him.

I also like how you wrote his mother. In the end, she was a very brave woman. I especially liked how she sew together his clothes in 4.: her means are so limited. But she tried her best.

midnightdiddle May 13 2006, 20:18:51 UTC

Thank you so much!

I also like how you wrote his mother. In the end, she was a very brave woman. I especially liked how she sew together his clothes in 4.: her means are so limited. But she tried her best.

Thank you especially for that bit. I'm very glad you liked his mother, because- Yeah. And thank you so much! I'm so very, very glad. :)