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Pets (Axel/Roxas, #14)

May 31, 2007 21:48

Title: Pets
Author: libekory
Claim: Axel/Roxas[/a snake]
Prompt: #14 ["poison"]
Warnings: The snake is maybe a bit more sensual than it should be.
Disclaimer: Kingdom Hearts belongs to Square-Enix, Disney, and subsidiaries. No profit, no copyright infringement intended, for entertainment purposes only.

( The snake was a bright, poisonous green. And after that day, Axel never went anywhere without it. )

axel/roxas, axel, roxas

Comments 6

angelflare June 1 2007, 20:57:02 UTC

That was mean!! XDDDDDDDDD Oooooohoho that snake wins badly! It was almost hilarious to see Roxas so obsessed with it. I really liked this part~~ XD Very interesting way to write this prompt, I would've never though of something like this! I specially loved the last two lines, very beautiful~ :D

libekory July 13 2007, 22:23:41 UTC

*purr* Thank you. This idea had been teasing at me for a while, so it was almost a relief to finally get it down on paper! X3

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libekory July 13 2007, 22:24:07 UTC

♥♥ Thank you. Everyone loves the snake!

unedited June 13 2007, 03:31:49 UTC

♥♥♥ It's hard to comment on what is specifically awesome about this one because it's all so awesome. But I love Roxas's fascination with the snake, almost jealous of it, and how it's not at all what he expected in the end -- and you can sense, in more than one way his fascination is less with the snake and more with Axel -- Roxas is a little like that snake, as well as jealous of it. :3 Heeeee.

libekory July 13 2007, 22:28:28 UTC

Bwahahaha. Yes, exactly. So much so. Eee, I love when the idea comes across that perfectly. X3 *looooves* Axel is himself the poison, in a very real way. Ironic, that, considering the way things end. :\

mirrorbrothers July 30 2007, 09:26:51 UTC

On the other hand, one can make less subtle and more juvenile observations about interest in Axel's trouser snake. I think I'll do that.