NCIS; Abby/McGee; Home

[erehwon6]

TITLE: Close to home

Comments

[nakeisha]

Excellent story, Sage - another excellent story.

I really well woven story with humour, affection, the kids bitching, friendship, love and a case too. And it worked really well; it was gripping.

Great start with Gibbs and Jenn - very clear to see and hear. Hee, go Gibbs. I love the idea that his getting coffee took so much longer than usual; I bet.

More Lt. Simms. She must have been in so much pain, hurting so much to do that. You made it so real and moving and you managed to show how much of a good mother she was really, how much she loved her baby; so much that she felt she had to do it. You feel for her and her brother and the baby. So well done.

Lovely scene in Autopsy - poor Jimmy, I can feel his fright as he had to give Gibbs a report. And his question to Ducky was so in character.

Lovely Abby and McGee scenes too.

And I can quite imagine just how many tapes Ducky gave Tim.

A really excellent story.

[erehwon6]

Thank you :)

I'd written an action/crime based story before, so wasn't quite sure if it'd work. Glad it did though.

Yeah I liked that part.
Who wouldn't want to coo over Gibbs with a baby? :)

Thanks, I wanted to get that across in a senstive way.

I know, bless him he's very sweet.

LOL I know; I've mentioned a later story that McGee is going to write a trilogy - even then he'd probably have material left over.

[nakeisha]

It worked really well.

The doting grandpa :-)

And it did; most definitely. Which is hard to achieve.

He's adorable.

Probably even have some left over if he wrote a trilogy of trilogies ;-)

[toomuchfandom]

Wonderful and cute and fantastic:D

Great case.

Loved the grandpa's!

[erehwon6]

Thanks, glad you liked it. :)