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[FILL] Distance, 3/3, Erik/Charles (Or Sex On The Beach, for the cracky title) anonymous July 22 2011, 04:42:47 UTC
The top of the suit parts, revealing Charles' chest, and suddenly Erik can't stop touching his skin, skimming his fingertips down his abdomen or thumbing his nipples or scratching his initials into Charles' collarbone. And all the while they kiss, part, kiss, part, kiss, their hips moving and never stopping as their pleasure swells to greater and greater heights--

Orgasm hits Charles with no warning, catching him entirely by surprise. He cries out, inadvertently biting Erik's lips--and then Erik is coming too, shuddering against him, his body tightening and relaxing in waves that Charles feels through him, his eyes staring into Charles' and saying things he has no words for.

They stay there for another long moment, panting into each others' lips, staring into each others' eyes. Then Erik sighs and drops into the sand beside Charles, chest heaving, eyes shuttering closed. They aren't quite touching, but their fingertips are separated by mere millimeters in the sand and Erik's mind is warm and present. Charles could reach out and touch Erik at any moment, physically or mentally, and that's enough for him.

"Um," Sean says.

Charles blinks, momentarily thrown. He levers himself up onto his elbows with considerable effort and squints up at everyone else, fighting against the strength of the sun.

Moira is standing several yards away to his right. She seems frozen; her mouth is gaping open, and she has halfway pulled her gun out of its holster, though now her hand just tightens and loosens uselessly around the handle. To her right and almost directly in front of Charles, Sean, Hank, Alex, and Raven are clustered. Sean is looking straight at him, a disbelieving expression on his face, though he refuses to make eye contact when Charles looks his way. Raven's expression is indescribable, and after one glance at her extremely jumbled emotions Charles decides not to try to interpret it.

Alex had averted his eyes at some point, his face turned to the side looking at nothing, and he remains that way even when Sean nudges him, apparently hoping for some support. Hank has turned his back on them entirely, burying his face in his hands. With his shoulders curled in and his head ducked, he looks remarkably small for someone so big and noticeable.

To Charles' left, Angel, Riptide, and Azazel look much less broken and much more confused, though there's an element of bone-deep horror in their thoughts as well--well, except Angel. "They shared a bed together at a strip club," Angel is explaining to a troubled-looking Riptide. "Really, I'm just surprised they managed to keep their hands off each other this long."

Charles opens his mouth, then closes it when he realizes he has absolutely nothing to say. Then he opens it again, only to realize that he still hasn't thought of anything. He thinks that maybe his position would be stronger if he stood up and started ordering people around, but at that moment Erik shifts his hand in a possibly-accidental, possibly-calculated move that makes their fingers knit together, and Charles decides not to bother.

Instead, he says, "Good work, friends: we saved the world!"

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Re: [FILL] Distance, 3/3, Erik/Charles (Or Sex On The Beach, for the cracky title) richiexcore July 22 2011, 04:45:22 UTC
Why couldn't the movie have ended like THIS???

Seriously awesome fill here! I totally love it!

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Re: [FILL] Distance, 3/3, Erik/Charles (Or Sex On The Beach, for the cracky title) robinsson July 22 2011, 04:55:45 UTC
LOL and WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
really, really i'm laughing so hard and my heart is filled with content. XD great job anon!!!!!

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Re: [FILL] Distance, 3/3, Erik/Charles (Or Sex On The Beach, for the cracky title) anonymous July 22 2011, 05:18:30 UTC
This is one of the best things I have EVER had the pleasure of reading. You are brilliant. Brilliant!

This was so perfect, and just like everyone else, I too wish that the movie had ended like that. Unfortunately, it didn't, but as of today this is my most favorite thing ever, and that makes it head!canon.

Also, I just love how Angel doesn't care whatsoever. She's so awesome. ;D

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OP here anonymous July 22 2011, 09:44:21 UTC
Anon, this was so, so lovely!

I love the fact that, even though in my mind this was complete crack, there is still something deep and aching running throughout the whole thing (or maybe I'm just seeing it that way, I'm not sure.) It was just an immense pleasure to read, thank you so much ♥

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Re: [FILL] Distance, 3/3, Erik/Charles (Or Sex On The Beach, for the cracky title) anonymous July 22 2011, 12:16:02 UTC
Brings all new meaning to the phrase "make love, not war," doesn't it? XD

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Re: [FILL] Distance, 3/3, Erik/Charles (Or Sex On The Beach, for the cracky title) anonymous September 29 2011, 12:21:34 UTC
This ending >>>>>>>>>>> canon.
Charles' last line was hilariously awkward, as were everyone else's oh-so-embarrassed reactions XD

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