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Prompt Post: ROUND FIVE

Jul 03, 2011 22:06

ROUND FIVE IS CLOSED

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Re: Fill: Safeword 1d/1 kayevelyn July 8 2011, 20:46:01 UTC

Erik looked at him, pushed his hair out of his face with a smile. “The part where I take care of you. It’s the best part of doing things differently. You bring someone to their breaking point, and you try not to push them over it, you really do, but sometimes mistakes happen and you have to work extra hard to make up for it, but no matter what, at the end of it all, you take the person who has given you themselves and you put them back together.” Charles’ mouth was dry as Erik continued. “It’s partly about control, because I determine how you get put back together, but that’s the whole thing. Take them to the edge, to the point where they go ‘I don’t think I can handle anymore,’ wherever that point is, and then putting them back together. If it’s is something as simple as a back massage, or as complex as needing to contort someone and tying them up with knots they can’t get out of, doesn’t matter to me. The important thing is that I get them there, and that afterwards I get to be the one to talk them down, and remind them that I’m there for them.”

“But you’d prefer the contortion,” Charles said simply.

“I prefer whatever they need. I told you what I want, how I get to that point doesn’t matter. It’s all up to you.” He spoke kindly and Charles looked away in shame. “So what do you like?”

“I don’t know,” he said honestly, ashamed. He wished he had answers, just to see Erik light up in delight.

He smiled, leaning down and kissing Charles on the lips. “Are you willing to find out?”

Charles didn’t need to think too hard, mind flashing to the words Erik had just said. Being taken apart, whatever it was that would do it, from back massage to knives to deep kisses, Erik just wanted to do it to him. “Yes.” He paused, pushing back the flash of guilt at yet another request. Erik wanted it like this. “Just, go slow?”

Erik grinned, and kissed him again. “Always.”

Re: Fill: Safeword 1d/1 kayevelyn July 8 2011, 23:13:47 UTC

fantastic!

Re: Fill: Safeword 1d/1 kayevelyn July 10 2011, 01:03:45 UTC

Simply beautiful! I thought Charles reaction was pretty realistic too; sometimes people try so hard to please someone else even if it makes them extremely uncomfortable and when they fail they're often overcome with grief and apologies. Excellent work!

Re: Fill: Safeword 1d/1 kayevelyn July 9 2011, 21:08:24 UTC

d'awwwwwww. a million kisses!

Re: Fill: Safeword 1d/1 javelle July 10 2011, 02:01:41 UTC

This was so sweet. I love it.

Re: Fill: Safeword 1d/1 kayevelyn July 10 2011, 02:01:51 UTC

This story was stellar, and here's why: the emotion was very much real. The interaction was a perfect mirror of what often happens in real situations like these. It was very comforting, in a way; I had a similar experience with my boyfriend and, although his reaction was a lot like Erik's, it's very easy to feel bad about it (why am I telling you this?). Lovely story.

Re: Fill: Safeword 1d/1 tresa_cho August 10 2011, 01:41:23 UTC

God this was beautiful. Such a wonderful fill.

Re: Fill: Safeword 1d/1 kayevelyn November 28 2011, 00:44:58 UTC

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