Prompt Post: ROUND TWO

Jun 07, 2011 05:19

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FILL: Let Me anonymous June 11 2011, 06:24:10 UTC
"Tell me more," Charles had asked, his hair, still damp from his shower, sticking up in all directions like his beloved Einstein. Please.

He’d looked so ridiculously young, almost hopeful, like a child asking for just one more story before bedtime, that Erik had been truly and utterly powerless against the request. And so he nodded, extending his hand toward Charles and feeling a warm thread of emotion wind up his arm as Charles’s fingers slid over his palm.

“I don’t,” he’d started to say and then stopped, unsure of what to say. Know how to remember. Know where to begin. Know if I can.

“I can help,” Charles said quietly, sitting down on the couch next to him so their bodies were pressed close from shoulder to knee, their hands still clasped. Let me.

Erik closed his eyes. He could feel a warm spring breeze on his face. The smell of bread twitched at his nose. The sound of his mother’s laughter as he tore into a roll newly from the over and a puff of steam made him cough was like the most beautiful symphony. Erik could almost feel her arms around his shoulders, her chin resting on the top of his head as she sang a song whose words were lost and they danced.

Erik’s cheeks were wet with fresh tears when he opened his eyes again, his heart feeling lighter than he could remember in a very, very long time. When he turned, he could see Charles had been crying as well, a bittersweet smile on his face. He was looking at Erik as though Erik had just given him the world--a lost world, but a world all the same.

“Thank you,” Charles said, his voice rough with memory. Erik’s memory.

Charles lifted their joined hands, pressing his lips against the back of Erik’s hand, kissing each knuckle.

Erik touched Charles’s cheek with his free hand, running his thumb along Charles’s jaw. He thoughts about the strength of this man beside him, about the fragility of life, and marveling at how those wisps of memories could mean so much to Charles, who had never been in want of anything. Had never known what it was like to be rounded up, to be forced into the ghetto, into the camps.

“I’ve never known that depth of love.” Charles looked at him, a tear following the path of its predecessors.

Erik leaned forward and kissed Charles, closing his eyes again.

Let me.

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Re: FILL: Let Me anonymous June 11 2011, 08:43:00 UTC
Beautiful! Please de-anon?

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Re: FILL: Let Me pollitt June 13 2011, 05:18:57 UTC
Thank you so much! I think this breaks the record (for me at least) of quickest viewing-to-writing for a new fandom. But I couldn't *not* write. Especially with this prompt.

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Re: FILL: Let Me anonymous June 11 2011, 12:55:05 UTC
Not OP, the stalker actually, but this is GORGEOUS. *goes back to re-read*

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Re: FILL: Let Me pollitt June 13 2011, 05:19:53 UTC
♥ Thank you so much! I hadn't planned on writing when I started looking at the meme, but this prompt just wouldn't let me go. Thank you again!

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Re: FILL: Let Me - OP pollitt June 13 2011, 05:20:50 UTC
*blush* Thank you! And thank you for the prompt. Once I read it, I realized I had to write it (and realized I had XMFC muses :)

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Re: FILL: Let Me thedustwhispers June 12 2011, 19:49:21 UTC
This is breathtaking. <3

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Re: FILL: Let Me pollitt June 13 2011, 05:21:13 UTC
♥! Thank you!!

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Re: FILL: Let Me tresa_cho June 12 2011, 22:56:17 UTC
Lovely. So lovely.

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Re: FILL: Let Me pollitt June 13 2011, 05:21:22 UTC
Thank you so much!

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Re: FILL: Let Me xmoonveilx June 13 2011, 02:52:25 UTC
Absolutely wonderful <3

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Re: FILL: Let Me pollitt June 13 2011, 05:21:38 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

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Re: FILL: Let Me anonymous June 15 2011, 03:18:16 UTC
Tearing up and wibbling over here. Achingly beautiful and heartfelt. Love the reversal at the end, too.

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Re: FILL: Let Me pollitt June 26 2011, 04:01:13 UTC
Oh thank you so much!! This makes me smile (and offering a tissue). :)

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Re: FILL: Let Me yakkorat_fics June 18 2011, 23:31:10 UTC
That last line... It's just so beautiful... This whole thing is just extraordinarily well done and I loved every word.

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