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GRAVITATION

Jun 09, 2009 08:09

GRAVITATION

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Tohma/Mika (implied Tohma/Eiri) bitterfic June 9 2009, 19:34:30 UTC

Looking at her, lying there beneath him, all he can think is that she looks so much like her brother...

Re: Tohma/Mika (implied Tohma/Eiri) lawless523 June 10 2009, 02:39:58 UTC

Great choice! I sometimes think Tohma married the wrong Uesugi. As much as I wouldn't want to have experienced Eiri's past, I think Mika's present is less enviable.

I have no Mika or Tohma icons so Eiri will have to do.

Re: Tohma/Mika (implied Tohma/Eiri) bitterfig June 12 2009, 12:13:53 UTC

After writing this, I remembered that Mika was pregnant at the end of the series and found myself hoping to God that the baby would in no way resemble Eiri. That would be way too creepy... Tohma getting a second chance with a little Eiri all his own.

Re: Tohma/Mika (implied Tohma/Eiri) lawless523 June 12 2009, 12:30:36 UTC

You'd hope that parenthood would cause Tohma to grow up a bit emotionally.

I'm having a hard time believing that Mika actually gave birth because it's what, seven years since Murakami-sensei finished the original series and probably at least six months into the EX storyline if not more and we've yet to see or hear of Tohma's and Mika's baby. Because of that lack of follow-up my head canon tells me she had a late-term miscarriage that didn't get mentioned. After all, she was having complications.

Re: Tohma/Mika (implied Tohma/Eiri) bitterfig June 12 2009, 12:56:38 UTC

I'm afraid following up on plot points in a coherent manner is not Murakami's strong suite. Mika's pregnancy may never be mentioned again or it might drag on for several more years or the baby might show up in the next EX chapter. One never knows.

Re: Tohma/Mika (implied Tohma/Eiri) lawless523 June 12 2009, 13:01:32 UTC

Consistency and continuity are not among Murakami-sensei's strong points. I've read that she's promised to include the Seguchi offspring in EX but have yet to see it.

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