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[lexaprose]

Fandom: Chess
Pairing: Freddie x Florence
Disclaimer: They're not mine :)
Rating: G to R
Theme set: Alpha

Comments

[artemis_obscure]

Amazing. Just...wow. You managed to portray the characters so wonderfully, and it's amazing how you manage to catch how they keep spiraling downwards. Just...amazing! I love this!

[chicafrom3]

Utterly brilliant -- you've really captured their relationship, in all its self-destructive glory.

I love this line:

The pain comes, building upon itself as Florence reels with the assault, a rod thrust by the man she loves into her oldest, deepest wound… she thought he was on her side… but maybe not…

Great job!