Hitsugaya x Hinamori [BLEACH] set beta.

Feb 23, 2007 17:17

Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Hitsugaya Toushirou x Hinamori Momo
(With a bit of Matsumoto in there.)
Themeset: Beta
Rating: PG-ish.
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This is my first attempt to do this. Oh, how hard it was.
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Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Hitsugaya Toushirou x Hinamori Momo
(With a bit of Matsumoto in there.)
Themeset: Beta
Rating: PG-ish
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#01 - Walking
She realized everytime she ( Read more... )

bleach, !set beta

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girlquinn February 23 2007, 16:09:58 UTC
*claps*

For your first time, it wasn't bad at all! I didn't even realize it played like a story until the last few sentences (OMG he died?!!!? ARRGHH!!!)

I was wondering about #13:
#13 - Bias
His lips formed into a horizontal line as she played with his hair, commenting that it obviously

Is it supposed to read incomplete like that?

Simply lovely work overall (#33 Stupidity is my personal favorite :3), but I think #1 Walking summarizes their relationship the most, does it not? ♥

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shannobi February 23 2007, 19:24:27 UTC
Woah, I didn't notice that. Well, I added that part in there... It was completed. I guess I subconsciously took it out or something. Oh well.

And you like it? Thanks. x] ♥♥♥

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helloshoe February 23 2007, 21:36:23 UTC
The sudden shift to angst took me by surprise. It hurt in a very good way.

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shannobi February 24 2007, 10:26:15 UTC
Ahaha. That's weird. =p

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tacchon February 23 2007, 22:10:50 UTC
Awww, that's so awesome. ♥

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gokusama92 February 23 2007, 22:47:32 UTC
awww i liked the marrage one

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vanillay March 12 2007, 04:02:04 UTC
The Question one is my favorite. The Whimsy and Walking are cute too <3

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