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Ouran - Kyouya x Tamaki

Aug 18, 2006 23:40

Fandom: Ouran High School Host Club
Pairing: Kyouya Ootori x Tamaki Suou
Theme set: Beta
Rating: PG
Notes: My first. Ouran-themed fic, that is. And that's there for the record. =D Also, the almost-execution of quotation marks and the absence of italics where you think they should be is highly intentional. And the death of correct comma, semicolon, dash ( Read more... )

ouran high school host club, !set beta

Comments 46

evocates August 18 2006, 15:49:35 UTC

This is. Incredibly sweet and sappy and eeeee Kyouya's notebooks and the permanent marker and and and.

I'm just sitting here with a huge grin on my face right now. So cute! And Kyouya is such an idiot and so in-character with his deliberate obliviousness and the Chopin! And Fuyumi's piano! I love the little details you put in like that. ♥

So much love. Also, you managed to make it in sequence without messing up the numbers and that's even more love. ♥♥♥

augustfai August 19 2006, 12:05:01 UTC

asdlkjsalkdjalksj. Thank you so much. When I posted it, I was so afraid people would be like, 'It's so out of character', but I haven't heard that yet and I am extremely relieved. XD Yeah, I'm a dork. Thank you again! ♥♥♥

lirren August 18 2006, 15:52:23 UTC

Oh, I'm in love! These are great. I love the way you used them to build an entire story. And I think you really got both voices down really well. Those two are just so wonderful together. #11 was my favorite.

augustfai August 19 2006, 12:05:34 UTC

Thank you so much! I was afraid it'd be terribly OOC, because Kyouya is such a pain to write for me, but I guess you proved me wrong. :D

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augustfai August 19 2006, 12:06:14 UTC

XD *revives* Thank you!!

jynxedfyre August 18 2006, 16:49:11 UTC

That was... Its so... *at a total loss for coherent words* ... so sweet and it just made me feel oh so warm and gooey inside and and.. oh so much LOVE. KyouTama OTP for teh win! And you win! At life! The internetz! Just.... *melts*

I really loved Sojourn, especially the ending. For a first Ouran-themed fic, it was brilliant. XD

augustfai August 19 2006, 12:07:29 UTC

KYOU/TAMA OTP FTW! ♥ And yes, I have won! Though only the internetz, maybe. I think life is a bit...much. =D

Thank you thank you!

stardust_halos August 18 2006, 16:50:33 UTC

So cuuuuuute~! I loved it! ♥ ♥

augustfai August 19 2006, 12:08:08 UTC

Thanksss! :D