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Severus Snape/Sirius Black

Jul 02, 2006 09:29

Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Severus Snape/Sirius Black
Theme set: Gamma
Rating: R
Warnings: Slash, angst, ugly degrading hate sex and violence.
Author’s Notes: This piece is set during the course of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. Several of the sentences have intentionally been left vague- you’ll have to figure out which character they ( Read more... )

!set gamma, harry potter

Comments 10

clapclapbow July 2 2006, 14:59:37 UTC

Hmmmm. I'm not really a fan of this pairing, but it was so unusual to see done that I just had to click on it and see what was what. And these sentences are really good; you established a great atmosphere for their relationship/not-relationship.

I especially have to say, #49 was so perfect that I have no words to describe it. I read it and was sent into shock, swear to God. I actually saved that one sentence to my computer so I won't forget it, how lame is that?

Anyway, bravo! You did an excellent job.

bitterfig July 2 2006, 18:49:18 UTC

Thank you for your comments, I'm really pleased you liked it. This pairing was a real challenge as I must admit I'm not really a fan of it myself but I wanted to see what I could do with it.

lover_youshould July 2 2006, 15:13:07 UTC

16, 27, 31 and 43 are fantastic, and 49 is brilliant. Awesome work.

bitterfig July 2 2006, 18:46:06 UTC

Thank you so much for your comments.

islandsmoke July 3 2006, 01:58:51 UTC

Brava!! I just wandered in to see what this was about, and read this as the first HP I came to. Extraordinary! Forty tore my heart out, and you know, it doesn't matter who said it.

bitterfig July 3 2006, 02:34:48 UTC

Thank you for your comments, I'm glad you liked it. As for #40 I couldn't do this pairing without Remus. They may be messing about with each other but they're both in love with him.

deloused_drunk October 14 2006, 06:19:59 UTC

OMG these one-sentencers are..just....*struggles not to use l33t-sp33k* ..teh L0v3!!
ever grateful for the RL/SB/SS-triangle (my fav)

This pairing is kind of..strange. But you actually make it sound believable! Loved it :)

KUDOS

bitterfig October 14 2006, 14:58:33 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it.

lipsofpoison January 5 2008, 00:06:43 UTC

Again, not a fan of the pairing but this was spectacular. Wonderfully in character and brilliantly woven. I did keep a list of my favourites - 14, 22, 27, 29, 31, 32, 34, 35, 41, 42, 43, 46, 48 - but as you can see, I was mostly naming them all. A beautiful, minimalist style. Spectacular.

bitterfig January 7 2008, 03:51:41 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked this.