Noir: Mireille/Kirika

Apr 23, 2006 08:19


Fandom: Noir
Pairing: Mireille Bouquet x Kirika Yumura
Set: Alpha
Rating: PG13

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wolfie April 23 2006, 13:37:45 UTC
Uwa~

I loved Market and Smile for whatever reason...

These are really well done, and I admire that they really are just one sentence for the most part instead of long run-on ones through cheating of semi-colons and the like as some have done for this challenge.

Thanks :3

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anenko April 23 2006, 14:34:12 UTC
Thank you for the kind comments!

I did make a lot of use of semi-colons and dashes, but I tried not to go overboard. Kirika and Mireille are the strong and silent type, anyway. *g*

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glazzal May 3 2006, 16:05:39 UTC
I adore these (have commented on FF, so I'll not repeat), but I'd really like to know, for #7, you really did mean "causal", right? This way, it's bringing across both inflections of "casual" and "causal" and I admire that but I'd like to know which meaning is stronger, in order to, well, better understand your particular interpretation of M/K, as anal as that sounds. :)

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anenko February 12 2007, 00:43:23 UTC
I'm terrible, I know. I'm sorry it's taken me this long to get back to you.

I wish I'd intended #7, but it really is a typo. I'm rather pleased with your interpretation, though.

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