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“shut up and say it again,” liam snaps and it makes no sense and then liam feels the second understanding comes to louis, snapping to awareness and they’re kissing again, clacking teeth and lips splitting and louis’ voice rumbles through him anytime they come up for air, “i love you, liam, love you love you love you.”
“you fucking twat,” liam chokes out, pushing away again but not far, because is this even fucking real, “how, louis, you never,” but he can’t finish that sentence so louis does for him, “i did, i did, i realized i felt something, but it wasn’t like with anyone else, nothing like any of them, and, it fucking terrified me, liam, so i ignored it, for a long time i tried to brush it off, but i can’t, i just can’t any more.”
liam is quiet for a minute and then he mumbles, “you fucking idiot,” hands coming to louis’ head, sliding into his hair and gripping hard enough to hurt. “since we were sixteen, louis.”
louis’ eyes are wide and shining and he says, “then i’ve got a lot of making up to do,” and it’s supposed to be funny but his voice has an edge to it and it breaks, so liam hauls him back again, kisses his nose, his cheeks, his eyelids and babbling love you, love you and god knows what in his own hoarse voice until louis quiets him, murmurs, “it’s okay, you have me, always, you have me,” and it is so drastically clear in liam’s ears, that louis has always been his, and they have both been fumbling around in the dark and waiting for liam to be louis’.
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THIS WAS AMAZING. no seriously I loved it so so much. it had all my favourite lilo things in it, it was perfect. ahhhh!
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i want to die
this is perfect
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The prompt for this is flawless (I'm sucha sucker for five!time fics) so I'm beyond happy that this fic was written by you, anon because it was perfect on so many levels and I'm pretty sure I fell in love with the very first sentence and your writing is beyond gorgeous and I'm torn between worshiping you and hitting you because I'm so jealous of the way you made this so realistically beautiful and cute and so Liam and Louis and... I HAVE TOO MANY FEELINGS.
BLESS YOUR SOUL, ANON, BLESS YOUR WONDERFULLY BEAUTIFUL SOUL.
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