Kink Meme - Round 2

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [10/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 01:08:03 UTC
He slinks out of the bathroom in a daze, hardly aware of pulling on his grey joggers, a plain white t-shirt and thick socks. Half-heartedly, he rubs his towel over his damp curls until they're almost dry, and then he turns to his bed and starts to shuffle over.

Knocking on the door stops him.

'Haz?' comes Louis's voice, clear and brash, and Harry shivers. He doesn't consider not opening the door, though, slopes over and swings it open, smiling involuntarily at the sight of Louis on the other side.

'Come in,' he yawns, grabbing his friend's hand and dragging him inside, slamming the door closed with his foot.

'Look, I just came to say,' Louis begins, having clearly decided on a speech. Harry doesn't much care to hear it. He pulls Louis down on the bed, noting that he's also in pyjamas, which is good, because it means he won't be leaving the room for any reason. 'Haz? Harry, can you listen, this is important,' Louis says sternly, even as Harry pushes him back onto the bed and climbs over him to settle comfortably on the other side.

'What's it about?' asks Harry lazily, stretching out like a cat and then curling back up again, throwing his limbs sloppily about Louis's own and burying his nose in Louis's neck. They haven't done this in a while, Louis thinks wistfully; it used to be close like this all the time, and then something changed.

'I wanted to apologise,' Louis re-starts, remembering where he'd been.

'No. Don't. My fault,' Harry mumbles into his neck, breath hot and Louis's stomach ties itself up.

'What? No, it wasn't -' Louis starts to protest, but then Harry's rolling away from him and sitting up and frowning. It's weird, Louis thinks, how he looks like he's waking up from something.

'Can we not argue? Not my fault, not your fault, let's leave it at that, yeah? You can treat people however you want, it's none of my business.' Harry starts to bite at the back of his finger, looking down at Louis with soft, droopy eyes he hasn't seen in a long time. It's the only reason he relents.

'Okay. Yeah. But I can't treat you like that, okay? You should remind me of that. Just because I'm tense and in a bad mood, doesn't mean I can take it out on you,' Louis says, more like he's lecturing himself than talking to Harry. He's relieved when Harry's limbs wrap back around him and he can just feel the textured skin of his lips against his neck.

'Can treat me any way you like, Lou,' Harry breathes and Louis tries, desperately hard, not to freeze at that. Tries desperately hard not to think about the connotations which Harry wouldn't - can't - mean.

'I - no,' Louis mutters, strained and wishing he'd brought his phone in with him and maybe he could have called El, hidden in Harry's bathroom for fifteen minutes.

Harry just huffs, though, because he's pretty much asleep. Louis doesn't get to sleep for a while, mostly because his cock's harder than it's been in what might be years.

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 01:10:05 UTC
They don't talk about it. Not that there's much to talk about. Harry's trying to force the fact that he wanked off to thoughts of Louis, what, treating him badly? He's still not even quite sure what kind of kink that would be called. Louis himself, meanwhile, wishes he could get the words "treat me any way you like" out of his mind, along with trying to think up ways to get Harry back into that soft, dopey place where he splays out over Louis like an oversized house cat.

It turns out to be easier than he thinks.

He wasn't really trying, or at least not consciously; subconsciously, he probably knew exactly what he was doing all along.

It's the lollies that do it. Harry gets given another bag, when they first arrive in Australia, and almost immediately starts sucking away on them. Except he doesn't suck, thinks Louis, watching him from across the hotel room, while he's meant to be doing an interview and Harry's waiting for his next one to come up. He just holds it in his mouth, thinks Louis, while at the same time saying I'm the messiest, I never clean up after myself (point one to Louis in Australia Innuendo Stakes). Then he remembers when he took the lolly out of Harry's mouth and that look.

'It's amazing, I love Australia,' he says, smiling confidently at the middle-aged woman in front of him, who's clearly thinking this is what it's all about?, which is fine. Louis couldn't really care less what people think of him, doesn't care if they think he's shit or ugly. They're not everyone and they're not important.

'And what's your favourite thing about the Australian girls?' asks the woman slyly. Louis almost doesn't hear, because he's choking on his own saliva as Harry pulls the lolly from his mouth and his tongue trails out briefly behind it.

'I have a girlfriend,' he says hastily and too loudly, reminding himself as well as the interviewer, who winks and laughs.

'You seem like the faithful type,' she says, sounding sincere, but Louis feels like he's about to burn up with shame. Still, he smiles and nods, and says something like 'I love her,' even though he's starting to think he doesn't mean it.

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Right, so, that's what I have so far and the rest will be up in the next day or so, promise. Please let me know what you think - this is my first 1D fanfiction -blushes-

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 01:16:37 UTC
love it. love it all.

especially harry being all cuddly and loose after a wank and louis wanting it back and laksjdlasjkd can't wait for more! :D

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 17:36:09 UTC
Yeah, that's my favourite part too ;) And don't worry, Louis will get his. Thank you!x

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] kiiarra03 May 9 2012, 02:00:26 UTC
Ahhhh! This is absolutely amaaaaazing!! I really really hope you do continue because I've just fallen in love with this<3 It's so well written and just all around lovely, especially with the way you word things. Thank you, just thank you for writing this x

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 17:38:08 UTC
I'm continuing as we speak :) Thank you so much, you're too kind! Especially as it's littered with typos from writing so quickly last night ... x

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] youcomecrash May 9 2012, 03:13:41 UTC
Oh wow. This is really really good! And it's your first 1D fic? I couldn't tell at all! Can't wait for more of this.

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 17:40:14 UTC
Yep, first 1D fic! But not my first fic, I come from other lands of fandom. You'll get more tonight (or whatever timezone you're in today I guess)! Thank you!x

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] youcomecrash May 10 2012, 02:29:47 UTC
Oh I definitely figured it wasn't your first fic, but I just meant in terms of your characterization of them. It's so spot on to how I see them. It seems like you've been writing them forever. :)

And yay, can't wait!

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] blondyke May 9 2012, 04:57:41 UTC
weeps silently

this is so fucking good okay??

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 17:39:01 UTC
Thank you!! And I hope that's positive silent weeping.x

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 05:07:21 UTC
ugh more please. i love this!

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 17:44:07 UTC
Thank you :) More on it's way!x

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] charmedone403 May 9 2012, 05:32:50 UTC
Oh god. This can never ever ever end. The lollies. Jesus.. And Harry telling Lou he can treat him anyway he's like.. Nothing has even happened and I'm already getting all hot and bothered! Can't wait for the next chapter!! xx

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] anonymous May 9 2012, 17:41:34 UTC
Ah, the lollies! The image of Harry+lolly+drooling!Louis = too much for me, it had to be done. Oral fixation etc. Hopefully the rest will make you even more hot and bothered haha.x

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Re: Treat You Like You Want To Be Treated - [11/?] teaatsix May 9 2012, 07:32:32 UTC
Oh my days this is amazing wonderful etc. I am floored that this us your first fic, its so perfect. Harrys inner voice was so well written. I can't wait for more

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