Flash Fiction #30

Jul 30, 2011 21:49


Almost done with Flash Fiction month! Part of me is really sad - the rest of me is really tired *g*

This could be triggering so, if LJ will let me, I'll cut it. If not, the few of you that are reading these anyway, skip it if you have abuse triggers!

Title: Flash Fiction #30
Fandom: The Walking Dead
Word Count: 1212
Characters: Ed Peltier, Shane Walsh, ( Read more... )

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luveskane July 31 2011, 02:00:14 UTC
Well damn Shane shoulda shot his ass!! But then again I kinda like the karma of him getting eaten by walkers LOL. That was the only time I ever cheered for the zombies in the show hahaha. I think you covered Eds assholeness very well and I can totally see Shange going and getting in his face for it!

*applauds*

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1_rhiannon_1 July 31 2011, 02:08:08 UTC
I agree, he shoulda shot his ass - Ed desperately needed to be shot! But yeah, it was great karma that he was eaten :D Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy, lol! I think that was the first, maybe only, time anyone ever cheered Shane too, when he beat the crap out of Ed.

Thank you babe <3 *takes a bow* I'm so glad you liked it!!

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luveskane July 31 2011, 02:14:02 UTC
Ha yeah, Shane went a little crazy with that but Ed really did deserve it and more!! Such an ass! I was shocked that the women were so horrified by Shane lighting into him they way they were.

*smooshes*

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1_rhiannon_1 July 31 2011, 02:22:40 UTC
Well, he had some aggression to work off after Lori lit into him like she did so I can understand it :P

Yeah, that kinda shocked me too. You'd think they'd have been all "go Shane!" Maybe not Carol - I think she was thinking that Ed would take it out on her later. Sadly, she was probably right - if he hadn't gotten eaten, he'd have beat the hell out of her. But the others looked at him like he'd grown another head - I loved what he did. Someone needed to do it - he stepped up and did it. Everyone else just keeping silent about what was going on was what infuriated me. Surely, together at least, they could've protected Carol, kept Ed away from her?

*smishes and smooches*

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luveskane July 31 2011, 02:27:03 UTC
*nods* This is true.

I know I would have been cheering Shane on in that situation! Yeah I can see Carol being upset by it thinking about what Ed would do to her and Sophia later on. It did need to be done and should have been done earlier. I was shocked by that part of the storyline, maybe I have too much faith in humanity but I was so surprised that not one person in camp stood up for those two!

*Snuggles*

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1_rhiannon_1 July 31 2011, 03:14:35 UTC
I did cheer him, right out loud! *g* I agree, it should have been done much earlier. You know that rat bastard beat on them for years :( Yeah, I'm with you - you'd think someone would've stood up, said something, did something. Anything!

*snugglehugs*

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luveskane July 31 2011, 12:31:40 UTC
I wonder if he ever went to jail for domestic violence before the outbreak?? Maybe we will find out one day. You know I am surprised Lori didn't stick her nose into it. She strikes me as the type to atleast corner Carol about it if not go to Shane to do something before Andrea got sick of it and confronted him..

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1_rhiannon_1 July 31 2011, 15:17:47 UTC
I doubt it - Carol wouldn't turn him in, she'd be too scared.

You make a good point. Maybe they did talk to Carol about it and she asked them to leave it alone. Still, you'd think that some of them would've done something before then. Jacqui called him out on the bruises he'd put on her - it wasn't a secret.

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luveskane July 31 2011, 20:53:59 UTC
No I doubt that too, but I can see the cops being called by a neighbor or something and then him taking it out on her after he gets out.

Yeah,that could have happened, it makes a little sense in my mind at least lol. Especially after that one comment by Jim(?) where it was obvious they all knew about it. and yup there was that whole interchange with Jacqui before Shane knocked his head in good LOL.

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