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Senses Challenge - Andromeda

Nov 12, 2007 15:35

TITLE: Love is Blind
AUTHOR: Andromeda
FANDOM: Life on Mars
RATING: Brown Cortina, slash: Sam/Gene
WORD COUNT: 550 words
EMAIL: fiandyfic@livejournal.com
AUTHOR'S NOTES: Written for the 1973flashfic Senses challenge. It seems I can't quite get off the porn ride. Hurrah for Pervember indeed. Despite the title, this is slightly fluffy and not at all angsty. I ( Read more... )

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Comments 33

duckyone November 12 2007, 15:55:24 UTC

See, that, right there, that's what I want. Not the particulars of course, I'm not a boy, but the feelings.

You win all of today's internet cookies/biscuits because that my dear, was breathtaking.

♥

fiandyfic November 13 2007, 13:51:28 UTC

Thanks!

(I love stealing folks breath away. And that didn't come out the way I intended...)

addygryff November 12 2007, 16:04:08 UTC

God, that was amazing.
The phrasing really is stunningly beautiful, and there's so much feeling in there..
Woah.
I loved it.

m31andy November 14 2007, 09:37:41 UTC

Thanks!

I'm turning into such a sucker for lyrical prose. It's terrible!

lackadaisydilly November 12 2007, 16:11:15 UTC

Absolutely everything ducky said above. That was very sensual.

Taking the memory of each one and wrapping and storing it carefully so it doesn't fade in the light of day. Beautiful line.

♥ You should win the world but it's not mine to give you (otherwise you'd have it in an instant), so you can win all my internet cookies as well as duckyone's.

m31andy November 14 2007, 09:38:19 UTC

*grin*

Thanks! Mmm. Cookies.

I should share though....

totallywow November 12 2007, 16:31:12 UTC

Sweet lovely hotness. All combined together to make this! LOVE. I am reading it with a cup of tea and milk buttons, which just makes it better.

m31andy November 14 2007, 09:38:56 UTC

Thanks!

Mmm. Tea. Tea is good.

*goes and makes tea*

bistokids November 12 2007, 16:45:02 UTC

Beautiful. Poetic. And yes, hot, but that's almost secondary here. So many luscious turns of phrase - Fingers entwined in the pause between together and movement., or the body begging in the night to be taken, to be shattered and reformed, or as natural as breathing and twice as necessary. Or any other random sentence. Unexpectedly, the actual shagging part was the most poetic of the lot. Can't imagine you need any more cookies, but there's more here should you require them.

m31andy November 14 2007, 09:40:10 UTC

Thanks!

I wasn't quite sure if I writing teh hot or not. I'm still not sure, come to think of it.

*G*