Enclosed Space Challenge, by Loz

Mar 15, 2007 02:38

Title: Private Universe
Author: Loz/lozenger8
Rating: White Cortina
Word Count: 725 words.
Notes: Sam/Annie, set very shortly after episode four of the second series. Spoilers for the whole of the second series so far. Written for both the “enclosed space” challenge and justbreathe80's "Less is More" challenge. Title from the Crowded House song.

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chelseagirl March 14 2007, 19:04:21 UTC
This season, the dynamic between the two of them is quite interesting, and a bit frustrating (and I don't mean that just from a 'shipper's perspective). They're kind of moving forward, and backward, and sideways all at once. Your fic captures that very well -- this feels like a conversation they need to have.

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lozenger8 March 15 2007, 00:07:01 UTC
The dynamic between them is fascinating. I haven't decided if it's a 'different writers' thing, or if there's a modus operandi. Either way, I'm looking forward to seeing how it resolves itself.

Thanks!

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galacticowl March 15 2007, 01:01:20 UTC
I'm with chelseagirl on the idea of the dynamic between Sam and Annie being frustrating. They're all over the place this season and I have no idea where this is going to go, but that's the beauty of it too.

Loz, your story captures that perfectly. THEY don't know where it's going but it's going somewhere!

Sandie

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lozenger8 March 15 2007, 01:09:17 UTC
Thanks Sandie :D

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lookin_for_luke March 15 2007, 01:16:17 UTC
I really liked that. I'm a big Sam/Annie fan and I liked how you wrote them in this story. I just wish they would kiss all ready though in the actual series. And not as Tony and Cherie :D

I'm Vicky_Tyler by the way on The Railway Arms. That's where I got the link to the fanfic

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lozenger8 March 15 2007, 02:20:40 UTC
Thanks :D

I think Sam/Annie is sweet. I really like what they've done with their relationship this series.

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scarletumbrella March 18 2007, 18:07:55 UTC
I agree with the above comments about Sam and Annie's relationship. I don't necessarily like them romantically involved but it's true that their friendship has a very interesting, strange dynamic. I think you captured it perfectly here. :) Lovely fic.

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lozenger8 March 18 2007, 22:01:12 UTC
Thanks :D

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t_a_n_g_o March 19 2007, 19:52:18 UTC
Great fic, really emphasises the tension between them.

I'm here from the Railway Arms, I'm rose_of_love

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lozenger8 March 19 2007, 23:11:34 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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