Particles of Light, Chapter Four: Open Doors and Bare Feet

[15lbpurebunny]

 Title: Chapter Four - Open Doors and Bare Feet
 Rating: PG, for language if you're sensitive
 Disclaimer: Not mine. Not mine. And, of course, not mine.

Comments

[citosol]

...uh here it is!!!!
I haven't read it yet,I'll read it this evening when I go home from work, but I feel happy in anticipation....
by now THANKS!
^_^
...
...I can't wait...

[15lbpurebunny]

Thanks so much, Citosol! Really hope you like it.

I'm afraid I've left you hanging again, though. Hope you forgive me!

speachless

[citosol]

Perfect.

I like the double entendre too. I really think Charlie would do that just in the way you described.
I like the irony (i.e.:“I like going barefoot. Its nice to go barefoot anywhere ya want and not get staph.”), and I had to google "candelnut" 'cause I didn't find it on my dictionary (I still burn it! ;P) and then I find out that there isn't any italian word to difine it! ...now I have to buy a new dictionary...^___^

don't worry I forgive you, I like so much this story! (..even if I still hope that the two of them sooner or later....aehm!...#^_^#)

Re: speachless

[15lbpurebunny]

Oh, I hear you....each chapter I fight between getting them together and keeping them apart for a bit longer. Like you said, tension is a good thing.

Candlenuts are tropical green fruit that would be hard to find. They are also sometimes called Indian walnuts. But, they are very leafy and green with hard outer shells.

I wanted to use something really weird. Just. Like. Charlie.

LOL!

PS Chapter 5 is up, so check it out.

Re: speachless

[citosol]

I run!