Oh god this was so HURTY, but in a good way... I love fics that deal with Jim's issues and how it affects his relationship and you did SUCH A GOOD JOB!
ditto Kirk's in such a difficult position, cos his emotions are all conflicting. one hand he totally wants to THROTTLE Spock and on the other, he just wants to say, forget it, let's not argue, you win, but his pride won't let him, and now his sense of self-worth, which has been challenged by neglect, is certain that doing that will invite further hurt - and thus he refuses to fold. *sigh* in many ways I like reboot Kirk more - what's happened to him in his life made him so approachable as person rather than just some action hero
it's not exactly the type of thing people want to read in fanfiction
of course, i disagree because i wrote the prompt.
but.
dskjgdfhst;arlds; thank you thank you thank you ;; i already forgot about this prompt because man, it's been a while, i didn't think anyone would take it. and then you did and you wrote something really angsty and it has substance and \o/ i'm glad you took this prompt up because man, that was something like perfect.
oh I meant nothing by my comment except to say that ack, fics with arguments can make people feel real down :) and I don't want people to be down oh your prompt stood out to me because honestly, the kinkmeme is massive now and it's covered a lot of the sexy kinks, and yours was like a relationship or emotional kink
I love how you don't make it easy, don't let either of them off the hook. I can't say I precisely enjoyed this -- but I was riveted by the emotion you described. I found this view into Spock and Jim's relationship very believable and very interesting as a result. Fascinating.
There is nothing pleasant about a fight so LOL I don't expect anyone to *enjoy* it, but I'm glad you were 'riveted' --this is real life crap that everyone deals with and yeah, even Spock and Jim with all their "destiny". Thanks for reading.
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and *wince* i am working on the rentboy!Kirk prompt - i don't really wanna show you until it's like done, you cool with that?
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Kirk's in such a difficult position, cos his emotions are all conflicting. one hand he totally wants to THROTTLE Spock and on the other, he just wants to say, forget it, let's not argue, you win, but his pride won't let him, and now his sense of self-worth, which has been challenged by neglect, is certain that doing that will invite further hurt - and thus he refuses to fold.
*sigh* in many ways I like reboot Kirk more - what's happened to him in his life made him so approachable as person rather than just some action hero
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of course, i disagree because i wrote the prompt.
but.
dskjgdfhst;arlds; thank you thank you thank you ;; i already forgot about this prompt because man, it's been a while, i didn't think anyone would take it. and then you did and you wrote something really angsty and it has substance and \o/ i'm glad you took this prompt up because man, that was something like perfect.
+mem, and then i'm gonna read it again :|b
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oh I meant nothing by my comment except to say that ack, fics with arguments can make people feel real down :) and I don't want people to be down
oh your prompt stood out to me because honestly, the kinkmeme is massive now and it's covered a lot of the sexy kinks, and yours was like a relationship or emotional kink
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Your last icon is the best. McCoy's face is just priceless.
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