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Fic: When in Central City, Part II

Mar 14, 2010 20:08

Title: When in Central City, Part II
Author: Erin (erinm_4600)
Characters: Adora, the future Tin Men, some OCs and a not-so-OC (mention of Ethan and a handful of other OCs)
Rating: G
Summary: Just when Adora figured the party couldn't get more awkward, Wyatt Cain comes to her rescue.
Warning: pre-series *almost-promptly follows When in Central City, Part I. tm_challenge ( Read more... )

~challenge, series: tin man!adora, .tm_challenge, fic: tin man

Comments 11

klcthebookworm March 15 2010, 01:27:50 UTC

"Let's just say," he started slowly, "if you deck me... I probably deserved it. She," he nodded in the direction of the girl, "decks me, it'll be to drag me back to her house, lock me in the basement and keep me as a pet." --*Giggle!SNORT*

And I love the fact that Adora has a proximity alarm for her grandfather.

erinm_4600 March 15 2010, 01:37:14 UTC

I'm rather glad it wasn't just Adora who laughed at that :D

klcthebookworm March 15 2010, 13:20:02 UTC

My second thought on that line once I stopped giggling was "who got the fandom cameo?"

It's okay, you don't have to name names. ;)

erinm_4600 March 15 2010, 13:29:14 UTC

Actually, she was just a throwaway OC for the snark.

miller0259 March 15 2010, 01:37:09 UTC

*claps* I love it!!

psst - I think a 'John' slipped in there when you meant Lyle? Or did I completely miss this John person to begin with? In the Ambush section

erinm_4600 March 15 2010, 01:38:20 UTC

You are correct. I wrote Lyle on Word, John and paper and had to go back and change them.

*passes gold star*
*goes to fix*

miller0259 March 15 2010, 01:44:37 UTC

I hate when I decide to change a name when I'm done...there's always that one lone WTF!name that I forget to change

erinm_4600 March 15 2010, 01:52:47 UTC

LOL! My problem was that I didn't remember that I'd named him in Word, until I started typing everything I'd written on paper.

Oh well, thank goodness for the edit button!

gatechic March 15 2010, 02:00:13 UTC

Momby, Raynz, dancing, Wyatt sticking his foot in his mouth, shovel...what else...

Oh heck, I loved it ALL!

erinm_4600 March 15 2010, 02:07:57 UTC

I just wish I could film it.. because the facial expressions just can't be captured in words by me

Or if I could draw.... ♥

I need a better Wyatt/Adora icon

luxuria_oceanus March 15 2010, 05:30:36 UTC

If she was going to get married - and that was a big 'if' - it would be to someone from the Eastern Guild.

BWUA HA HA HA HA HA!

Oh, awkward moments. *squishes*