Title: Saturday
Author: Erin (
erinm_4600)
Characters: Adora, Wyatt, the recruits, Ethan and the Captain and his wife
Rating: PG
Summary: The day before the Officers' Ball, Adora heads to the range and the boys get haircuts.
Warning: pre-series *follows
Friday Night Dinner and squishes inbetween
Intimidation. For
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And Levi looks familiar, but I can't place him. *snort*
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Funny thing about Levi - it's not that he looks like Billy... but that he IS Joey.
If that makes any sense..
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It makes perfect sense to me. :)
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*hint to Josh: Garrett is the scruffy one - most of the time*
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And she likes him
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We all know the real reason, but female solidarity. Let Wyatt remain clueless. Clue-by-fours are more fun that way. :D
To shift gears here: do you ever paste in the missing scenes, especially when they've already been written? It's not how I would format things, so that's why I'm asking.
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You mean put them into what's already posted? No.
Scenes come and go and, once the story catches up to what's been posted, I try to weave them together. Hence the oddness of this one - When I wrote the scene at the range, originally, I didn't know when it had happened; just that it had.
I am trying to get Steve to focus and follow a flow because, if it's annoying to me, I can only imagine how confusing it is for you to read :)
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