Fic: Saturday

Aug 09, 2009 01:27

Title: Saturday
Author: Erin (erinm_4600)
Characters: Adora, Wyatt, the recruits, Ethan and the Captain and his wife
Rating: PG
Summary: The day before the Officers' Ball, Adora heads to the range and the boys get haircuts.
Warning: pre-series *follows Friday Night Dinner and squishes inbetween Intimidation. For gatechic
Disclaimer: The original characters belong to ( Read more... )

series: tin man!adora, fic: tin man

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gatechic August 9 2009, 13:03:48 UTC
Awesome!

And Levi looks familiar, but I can't place him. *snort*

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erinm_4600 August 9 2009, 13:36:07 UTC
Now, on to the DANCE! \O/

Funny thing about Levi - it's not that he looks like Billy... but that he IS Joey.

If that makes any sense..

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gatechic August 9 2009, 14:02:00 UTC
Hoorah!

It makes perfect sense to me. :)

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gatechic August 9 2009, 14:07:47 UTC
Now add him to the Tavern and watch Josh lose his mind trying to figure out which one is Levi and which one is Garrett.

*hint to Josh: Garrett is the scruffy one - most of the time*

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ext_182955 August 10 2009, 16:22:36 UTC
Adora's a lot nicer than I would be. Course, after I let him have it, romance would have no chance. :p

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erinm_4600 August 10 2009, 17:02:29 UTC
She's used to punk-guys at home, though, so it's more close quarters than anything else.

And she likes him

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ext_182955 August 10 2009, 17:39:34 UTC
Okay, I'm playing nice until I get my badge. Sound strategy that.

We all know the real reason, but female solidarity. Let Wyatt remain clueless. Clue-by-fours are more fun that way. :D

To shift gears here: do you ever paste in the missing scenes, especially when they've already been written? It's not how I would format things, so that's why I'm asking.

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erinm_4600 August 10 2009, 17:47:01 UTC
Well, she doesn't actually know that she knows.. I think.

You mean put them into what's already posted? No.

Scenes come and go and, once the story catches up to what's been posted, I try to weave them together. Hence the oddness of this one - When I wrote the scene at the range, originally, I didn't know when it had happened; just that it had.

I am trying to get Steve to focus and follow a flow because, if it's annoying to me, I can only imagine how confusing it is for you to read :)

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