Inferno; Chapter Two- Safe

[12thgrave]

Title: Inferno; Chapter Two- Safe
Genre: Action, Angst, Romance, AU
Main Pairing: Ruki x ??
Rating: PG-13
Warning: None
Disclaimer: Truth be told, I own them now. I adopted them against their will and they are now my older-than-me sons.
Summary: Stuck in a burning building, Takanori relies on his ladder to save him as he has them and many

Comments

[in_bloom81]

I love the concept of the fic~ What I find interesting : I like how a certain small amount of time (of ruki being stuck in a burning building) has been divided into chapters and how the narration which revolves around his thoughts and feelings extends the fic .. that is , for now I get the idea that the chapters consists of a few hours of the day instead of a number of days.. So it’s not the actual mechanical-time that passes by which comprises of this fic’s length but it’s the psychological-time consisting of emotions and flashbacks that gets extended. The title also appealed to me. The space Ruki’s in ..his mental state.. really is in hell~
Ah and…Don’t worry about the 'not too many comments'-thingy ^^
To be honest I'm waaaay too busy right now to even read fics and stuff...But couldn't stop myself from commenting cause you deserve it. Sometimes people feel shy to comment (for example , me) and sometimes fans read a jrock-fic for the thrill of reading ‘yaoi’. It depends on the readers taste , expectations and mood right? Another reason it might take people a while before they read this fic of yours is cause of the ‘pairing’ ..I know some people prefer reading only their OTP though a few like the surprise element in unrevealed pairings. Some people like me read whatever they find appealing~ So, 'not too many comments' doesn’t mean your writing isn’t nice~ As for me, like I said, I love what you wrote ^-^ please continue♥ !

oh and yeah .. I love how you wrote Ruki ^___^