Fruits Basket: Shigure's New Novel/ Hatori/Tohru/ PG

[self_portraitz]

Title: Shigure’s New Novel
Author: self_portraitz
Fandom: Fruits Basket
Pairing: Hatori/Tohru
Word Count: 2,790
Rating: PG
Summary: Hatori agrees to read Shigure’s new novel to Tohru
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything
Warning(s): None

Comments

[atomais]

I loved this! The words were just mixed up beautifully and I loved the interactions. Well done~!

[self_portraitz]

thank you so much for reading it! I'm so glad you liked it!

Story-line

[fatal_wound]

I don't see how this is a Toriru...Pre-slash, perhaps, but anything done here could be viewed as one-sided, or just friendships. There's too much left unsaid while the unimportant things, like Kyo's anger, are played out beyond their usefulness in the story. The sentence structure is iffy at best, and the story makes little sense, especially if there was ever a specific pairing in mind.

Re: Story-line

[self_portraitz]

Lol, I agree.