Fruits Basket: Shigure's New Novel/ Hatori/Tohru/ PG

Jul 23, 2008 10:30

Title: Shigure’s New Novel
Author: self_portraitz
Fandom: Fruits Basket
Pairing: Hatori/Tohru
Word Count: 2,790
Rating: PG
Summary: Hatori agrees to read Shigure’s new novel to Tohru
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything
Warning(s): None

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hatori/tohru t8 (self_portraitz)

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atomais July 23 2008, 17:54:03 UTC
I loved this! The words were just mixed up beautifully and I loved the interactions. Well done~!

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self_portraitz July 23 2008, 19:12:50 UTC
thank you so much for reading it! I'm so glad you liked it!

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Story-line fatal_wound September 4 2010, 19:52:14 UTC
I don't see how this is a Toriru...Pre-slash, perhaps, but anything done here could be viewed as one-sided, or just friendships. There's too much left unsaid while the unimportant things, like Kyo's anger, are played out beyond their usefulness in the story. The sentence structure is iffy at best, and the story makes little sense, especially if there was ever a specific pairing in mind.

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Re: Story-line self_portraitz September 4 2010, 20:05:30 UTC
Lol, I agree.

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