Title: Shigure’s New Novel Author: self_portraitz Fandom: Fruits Basket Pairing: Hatori/Tohru Word Count: 2,790 Rating: PG Summary: Hatori agrees to read Shigure’s new novel to Tohru Disclaimer: I don’t own anything Warning(s): None
Story-linefatal_woundSeptember 4 2010, 19:52:14 UTC
I don't see how this is a Toriru...Pre-slash, perhaps, but anything done here could be viewed as one-sided, or just friendships. There's too much left unsaid while the unimportant things, like Kyo's anger, are played out beyond their usefulness in the story. The sentence structure is iffy at best, and the story makes little sense, especially if there was ever a specific pairing in mind.
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