Everyone's a Critic

Jul 16, 2011 14:19

Fandom: U-KISS
Rating: PG
Genre: Crack
Pairing: Alexander/Kevin
Word Count: 809
Summary: Kevin writes a story, Alexander is not pleased.

Theme: 33. Not Yet Rated

Author's Note: Started out as something ridiculous a writing exercise, became something indescribable instead. I'm...slightly ashamed. /rolls around

Everyone's a Critic )

( length: one-shot, music: u-kiss, # challenges

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s2_otter July 17 2011, 15:42:29 UTC
Kevin is incredible, I swear /bows to the god with the magical mushrooms

And this is pure genius, you never fail to amaze me, seriously.
Remember the other time I said I remember all your plots because they're all too damn memorable? Well this just went in with it.

It's so short I wish we could read Kevin's story as a sequel or something XD!
What's with Kevin making people die lolololol.
Eli being haunted by Soohyun /dying forever

“I died. How is that a conflict?”

Kevin blinked a few times. “The other characters need to figure out how you had died.”

KEVIN'S AWESOME, IDEK <3
AND YOU'RE EVEN BETTER /dyingdyingdying

THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR GENIUS <3

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y0naki_x3 July 17 2011, 21:57:01 UTC
It was supposed to be longer. But it was too ridiculous and out of hand and I didn't know what to do with it, so... orz

What's with Kevin making people die lolololol.

He, um, likes playing God with people's lives. =o=;;
And I love the idea of Soohyun haunting people, especially Eli. Like making rattling and moaning sounds while Eli is making a trip to the bathroom at night, lmao

Aww, thank you always for your flattering comments. :D

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s2_otter July 18 2011, 00:56:09 UTC
HAHAHAH, go on with the ridiculousness XD

LOLOLOLOL. I hope he's not a total sadist then :3. I mean, at least he has mushrooms to revive them lolol.
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA, that'd make Eli pee in his pants lol, so bad. XD
And then comes Dongho that walks in nonchalantly and saying "Hi" to Soohyun lolololol.

<3

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y0naki_x3 July 18 2011, 03:39:45 UTC
Well, the biggest problem was trying to figure out how to put it into words and, um, get the image across, because, well...the thing in my head is downright silly and ridiculous. orz

Nahh, he's just having fun getting back at those who usually prank him. XD;;

And then comes Dongho that walks in nonchalantly and saying "Hi" to Soohyun lolololol.

Dying, omg, just dying at this image. I can see it happening...with the addition of chinchilla!Kiseop on Dongho's head. 8D

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s2_otter July 18 2011, 03:44:09 UTC
Wahahaha! XD
I love your sillyness, then <3

Oh my, haha naughty Kevin~ :3

XD Kiseop just has to crawl up onto people's head, doesn't he :3!

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